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Dreaming Eternity

She screamed to awaken I didn’t know what she meant It’s me that has shrunken It all happened while I dreamt Its beauty and such radiance Have others fallen to the same hallucination Like loving a simple acquaintance It’s a wonderful sensation But the sensation isn’t real It’s made up of a fake soul With the devil I made a deal From the earth I stole But is all hope lost Is there no salvation Is this how much I cost Thrown to eternal damnation But the dream is done I must wake up to my fate I have an appointment with the sun And for this I mustn’t be late

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/31/2009 11:15:00 AM
Interesting write. Like the last stanza especially. Sara
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