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Domenico Gatti - Purita

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I arise from my field of wishes stillness caught in the absence of a breeze where dandelion seeds forget how to fly I've been dazed half a lifetime and now, in my hands I hold every desire to be outside time, immersed in love yet the world stands still words fail, wants curtailed - I kneel, entranced by proximity devastated by distance such closeness to a dream ~ a death in itself ~ I am without reflection without air in my lungs dormant, breathless aware of the lack of y o u conscious, a spiralling wind can whip away this one wish - you, within arms reach holding my gaze bringing about feeling oh dandelion deliver the softest kiss I wish, I pray, I reminisce there's nothing else I need but this

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Date: 1/20/2025 7:03:00 PM
This is an interesting poem. A girl, frozen in time, is trapped forever more by a cruel artist. Lol. I hope her doppelganger was paid well.
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