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Dog Days of Summer

Alice Hubbard's home was not ever cluttered, like azure roses, in rows. Full of sun, the panes were never shuttered, typical where love grows. Alice was fondly called, 'Old Mother Hubbard,' by people of the town; And her dog, Bandit, was often spoilt, like diamonds, in night's crown. Alice was a widow, and her children were grown. She still enjoyed life. She and Bandit were blithe companions, like rainbow, since dark strife. Dear Alice became somewhat forgetful, like absentminded, desert rain; Often forgetting where she had put things, never to locate them again! Field sparrows were flying above foxgloves, in a new fashioned summer, When firm friends gifted familiar wonders; like scarlet butterfly cultures. Yellow finches and pink flamingos flitted, in a flurry of feverish dances; When the younger generation came to call, with favorite sister, Frances. She lived in the house of happiness, with wonders in every apricot day, Like jewels, waiting to be discovered, always sparkling to show the way. Red squirrels scampered and spotted turtles sneaked, on Salvia Street; When Bandit scurried, scattering scarlet leaves, to commentary tweets. Typically in neon purple, new night, beneath nebulous, crowds of stars, Alice nibbled and chatted with neighbors, on her porch of glimpsed Mars. 'Kiss me over the garden gate ' blooms leaned, and puckered pink lips; And yellow, hula hibiscuses were swaying, like lullabies on rocking ships. Golden leopard's bane was much avoided, as orange lion's tails wagged. Piggyback plants hitched rides, on tomorrow wings, as red dusk lagged. After eating lunch one day, Alice saved a meaty bone for beloved Bandit; To be put into a dish in the cupboard, for a later treat, as she'd planned it. When Bandit came in, full of sunshine and fun, eager for his usual treat- Alice was stunned to see the treat was missing; like wafting petal defeat! 'Old Mother Hubbard, went to the cupboard, to give the poor dog a bone; When she came there, the cupboard was bare; and so the poor Dog had none!' What dreadful times these were; like red sunset at gold, glittering noon! Hot, hungry, Bandit began a steady whine, as a wolf howls at pearl moon. It was the season of chasing lizards, flickering fireflies and swift squirrels; But, blue Bandit was in such a sorry state, that he chased his tail in circles. Forgetful Alice found the bone in the parlor, where she had gotten a candle; Then forgot to retrieve the dish, like nature, with too many colors to handle!
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Date: 8/27/2024 10:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful dog write/story. A cute dog picture. Great ending. She had gotten because of old age. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day........................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/27/2024 9:01:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed both picture and poem, Paula. Thank you for delighting me by letting me know. Very best wishes, Evelyn :)
Date: 8/19/2024 9:52:00 PM
Sorry for being late with your usual poem as I am undergoing a lot of tests for my heart which is too old for comfort. A lively poem with all the ingredients one expects from you. Imagery and story telling excel. Hugs.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/20/2024 11:45:00 AM
Oh, I truly understand, my friend. I am praying that your tests will show good results. Thank you so much for your gracious words of appreciation. I'm glad you enjoyed this tale. Hugs and blessings.
Date: 8/19/2024 4:54:00 AM
Dear Evelyn, What a wonderful rewrite of Old Mother Hubbard. I enjoyed the adventures with Alice and her dog bandit. I also feel bad for her memory loss. _ Wonderful read! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/19/2024 9:08:00 PM
Thank you for your joy evoking remarks, my dear friend. It's such a pleasure to read your comment today. I hope that your week is very nice. Blessings. :)
Date: 8/17/2024 8:39:00 PM
This is another splendid nursery rhyme. Well done. .
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/18/2024 8:51:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks, my friend.
Date: 8/16/2024 10:54:00 PM
So detailed imagery in your descriptive write! As always an engaging read, I absolutely loved the storytelling here done in such a seamless fashion! Your way with painting with words is truly awe inspiring! I love the flow and depth of this! And impressive how youv rhymed too! Well delivered couplet! Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/17/2024 3:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for your warm words, dear Ink. They bring sunshine into this rainy day. Your gracious compliments are so encouraging. I hope your weekend is wonderful. My very best wishes, Evelyn
Date: 8/16/2024 6:29:00 PM
Great tale weaved around Mother Hubbard story! Each couplet desires to be examined thoroughly, so delightful. Poor forgetful lady, sad the whine…glad she found the bone…sad times. Hugs-a-million! Kim
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 8/16/2024 9:23:00 PM
Thank you for your precious comment, Kim. Reading it was a great pleasure. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and blessings. :)
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