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Doctor, Doctor

Doctor, Doctor Doctor, doctor I've fallen and can't get up Will you call my man so he can bring a cup The alarms are ringing The coffee is brewing Doctor my arms are shaking and can't wake up. Written: Nov. 11, 2015 Theresa

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/25/2016 1:51:00 PM

My senses in totality are in awe of your wonderful lines. Liquefied bliss from the boil of glorious words has brought out enchanting aroma beyond scaling. 7 is simply an underscore for this fine share.

Theresa Cw
Date: 2/1/2016 1:04:00 AM

Thank you so very much Funom for your glorious enchanting comment on this penned limerick of mine... Also thanks for the 7.... Theresa

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/30/2015 5:05:00 PM

Hey Theresa my love... a LIMERICK!!! Yee Haw! More please... love and huggers, Jacko xoxox

Theresa Cw
Date: 12/1/2015 1:42:00 PM

Ha ha ha!! So very glad to see you again young man, always a pleasure...love and huggers back at you, theresa xxx