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Dizzy Dancin

Morning sun shining bright White lace curtains blowing in the wind Open your eyes child of love Your best days bout to begin Silver hair is far away, now it shimmers in the sun Anticipation in every heart beat This is the day you'll meet the one The one who haunts your dreams The one whose face you can't see But they twirl you round and round Dizzy dancin to the drums that pound Dizzy dancing to the strumming sound They lift you from the ground spin you round and round and round

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Date: 3/31/2025 11:20:00 AM
A lovely tribute Crystol, I'm sure she'll do you proud. Doesn't seem long since my three daughters were at home, now they've all flown the nest Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
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Date: 3/30/2025 1:48:00 PM
A poem for your daughter? Her time for dizzy dancing for life may indeed come. Are you ready to be a grandma?
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/31/2025 9:43:00 AM
Yess, for my Rosie. She was accepted into the college she wanted to go to! Lol... I've been ready! But she says she's not going to have kids... we'll see. She's a late bloomer as they say. But honestly, I'm proud of her for waiting for romance. College and career, then marriage and babies. Perhaps college will see her out of her shell. Thanks for stopping by Tom! Xo
Date: 3/30/2025 9:04:00 AM
Your "Dizzy Dancin" is a wonderful write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Enjoy your blessed/fun day writing away..............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/31/2025 9:31:00 AM
Ty Paula! Xo
Date: 3/30/2025 8:03:00 AM
- A lively lovely poem, Crystol :) - hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/31/2025 9:31:00 AM
Ty ! Xo
Date: 3/30/2025 7:27:00 AM
A most uplifting resonating poem! xomo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 3/31/2025 9:31:00 AM
Thanks! Xo

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