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"Every time he looked at me I felt like I'd touched my tongue to the tip of a battery.... a girl doesn't think straight when she's that close to electrocution." --Cath Crowley
I keep seeing you in strange places. My heart flutters, you grin at me. I blush and I turn away. You are too dangerous, and you know you are! Maybe next time we will speak; maybe not!

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Date: 1/24/2024 4:41:00 PM
the quote at the beginning was perfect....I wondered about the act of stalking and being stalked. 'seeing you in strange places would create discombobulation. Clever, I like it.
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Date: 1/23/2024 1:08:00 PM
Encountering someone who is emotionally captivating but also potentially dangerous, could trigger an internal struggle with their attraction to this person, a lovely poem.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 1/23/2024 1:28:00 PM
Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs