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Diminuendo

March in with a slam Awakening from slumber Roaring with thunder Comes in fiercely like a lion Humbly leaves like a lame lamb March 26, 2023 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest: Tankacrostic

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/9/2023 11:40:00 AM
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- "Awakening from slumber" ... comes with mach number ... lovely winning poem, congratulations, Margarita :) - hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/9/2023 6:11:00 AM
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With a strong lion and a lame lamb beautiful juxtaposition is depicted. Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/8/2023 2:16:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful write. Yes, in like a lion and out like a lamb. "Happy Easter" with blessings...................
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/8/2023 11:19:00 AM
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I always loved that saying but this year it did not really apply out here. liked the internal rhyming as well. Congrats
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Robert Johnson
Date: 3/30/2023 6:16:00 PM
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Such a clever title. I'm ready to be an April fool. LOL
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/30/2023 6:49:00 PM
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Me too, if only for one day ;)
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 3/27/2023 2:05:00 PM
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It's been pretty "lamb-like" all month long here...thank goodness. BOL in the contest, Margarita.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/27/2023 2:46:00 PM
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I wish I were there, I speak Canadian talk :)
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/27/2023 3:37:00 AM
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Fantastic!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/27/2023 11:28:00 AM
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Roaring! Thank you:)
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 3/27/2023 1:26:00 AM
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Oh yeah! Great one, Margarita:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/27/2023 11:28:00 AM
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Thank you!

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