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The poem is in conjuction with the video.

My daughter has just recieved her Honours degree at the Glasgow Art school.

This is one of the videos she produced.

@ copyright Aneela Ali.

 

This poem is in conjunction with the video.
A spell to cast you in Watch me! I the queen jester, SteamPunk aviator, Cybor goth, Travel these dimensions That I control walking through and bursting in to life, Lifting my spirit and soul, Laughing and enjoying these worlds, Looking for that something, Casting that spell to cast you in, In the end I take your soul

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Date: 4/10/2018 12:40:00 PM
Tahira your daughter is not only flipping talented but gorgeous as well! This piece was perfect for the video!
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 4/10/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thank you for you lovely comment Shadow. My daughter appreciates your comments. :)
Date: 12/11/2017 9:42:00 AM
I would like to look on this as dimensions of life...searching to find a balance between earthly and spiritual concepts...a journey of learning and realization. ~ Watched the video which I class as semi abstract, leaving a lot to our imagination and interpretations. Regards // paul
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 12/13/2017 4:06:00 AM
Thank you Paul for your lovely comment. My daughter appreciated it and said "Thank you".:)
Date: 12/5/2017 3:34:00 PM
I found this poem to be differently written. You did a good job. Tahira nice to meet you.
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 12/5/2017 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Darlene for your lovely comment:) Nice to meet you too... will be coming by later this week to checkout my new friends poems.:)
Date: 11/25/2017 11:01:00 AM
Great imagery - love your description. Well done, Tahira.
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 12/5/2017 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Line Gauthier for your lovely comment:)
Date: 11/7/2017 10:45:00 AM
This is deep.. I like how the poem relates to the poem..
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 11/8/2017 2:10:00 AM
Thank you Silent One for the lovely comment:)
Date: 11/5/2017 8:32:00 PM
That is amazing Tahira and I love the poem
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 11/6/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Tim for you lovely comment:)
Date: 11/5/2017 7:47:00 PM
I really liked your poem, that video was cool too!!
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 11/6/2017 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Arthur for you lovely comment:)
Date: 11/5/2017 6:17:00 PM
my perception of this video is different than your take, with your poem...it is one of exploring all the reasons for us to exist, finding no answers but one with the party favor at the end that brought laughter, life is to be enjoyed, not filled with anguish from every unfulfilled purpose of why we are here...a very deep video
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 11/6/2017 8:05:00 AM
So very well said, you are correct Frederic. My daughter said "very true" i let my daughter know i was putting a twist on it. She was fine with that. Thank you for your lovely comment :)

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