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Written, May 10, 2024
For the Contest, Delphic, Delusion, Disaster, Dauntless
Sponsor, Sotto Poet

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Inspiration, Title 1/ Delphic - Quote: The forest is my loyal friend A Delphic shrine to me. Ralph Waldo Emerson
Since, I was a child the forest has been my friend, I could wander all day dancing among the trees: there was such delight for me around each new bend, I would listen and feel the caress of the breeze; and it is in the forest I learned to transcend. Even on bright days the forest has shadows dark, my path decorated with roots and wild flowers: branches lashing, clashing and a screaming sky lark, yet, I am not afraid and wander for hours; the canopy above me like a curved green arc. Still the forest is a safe refuge so I go, I adore the ancient trees mystical secrets: and I search for the puzzling Delphic hidden glow, the temple priestess going deeper, so reckless; snaking vines grasp for me and green lattice leaves flow. The forest is a shrine strange, veiled, and intricate, an unfathomable puzzle mysterious: a place full of Delphic mystery infinite, often I feel immersed- drunk and delirious; and see sun in bright streaks and flashes scintillant.

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Date: 5/11/2024 11:34:00 PM
You have woven a magical realm befitting the Delphic oracle of ancient Greece, and it wends through the forrest mirroring your thoughts. Beautiful, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 5/12/2024 3:30:00 PM
Suzette, thank you for the wonderful comment and compliment, hugs
Date: 5/10/2024 3:44:00 PM
an outstanding response and entry into the 'Delphic' contest. Your words and rhymes are Delphic in and of themselves. I, too, have loved the forest since I was a small child. I agree with your words:'the forest...a place full of Delphic mystery infinite, ...drunk and delirious. Sometimes I'd just like to sink into the forest walls! :-) Best wishes with the contest. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 5/11/2024 3:10:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for your lovely comment, compliment, and for sharing and encouragement, appreciate, hugs

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