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Delivered Through Heaven's Gate

Quote: “Lenses grant vision, perspectives determine what we see.” Poet As faith confirmers, glorious, color-chorused rainbows caress. Brilliant beauty as fresh delivered through Heaven’s gate, brightens human hopes, uplifting faith to further radiate. Sensations sparkling gloriously bright as any God made jewel grant elation promises that soothe any doubts man may mutter. For many, rainbows are a visual grabber, seeing faith further congealed. Those lacking even faith’s shadow, view rain as the subject matter.

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Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 3/24/2025 4:30:00 AM

Congratulations, dear poet for your high placement in this poetry contest with a colourful write on the shine of hopes and faith that are jewels of life, leading to the gate of heaven, though shadows may mutter to fulfil their wish.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2025 2:41:00 AM

- Back with a congrats, CayCay :) - Have a wonderful new week :) - hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 3/22/2025 11:04:00 AM

Dear caycay, poetic soul, I love the way youv used the prompts here and how you’ve delivered a poem that depicts what rain could do, and also the descriptive nature of your poem creates a very beautiful ambience, “For many, rainbows are a visual grabber, seeing faith further congealed.” So true and that line stood out for me the most! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/22/2025 10:52:00 AM

Somewhere over the rainbow, I might find a pass and enter your gate. Simply magical. Best for a win.

Paige Hind

Date: 3/22/2025 9:02:00 AM

Very lovely, and I could see your "perspective" -

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/21/2025 11:05:00 AM

maybe its rain that brings ab out the rainbow dear Cay, but still you got to admit its pure magic to look at. Brilliantly done, gl in the contest dear poetess

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2025 10:00:00 PM

Silly me, Silly you, I KNOW that! 7 beautiful lines aren't about facts, they're about any topic one can think of to end with a zing. I had nada idea, until it flashed, 'rainbows are God's promise to never flood the world again' and etc., etc. So good to have you, MRR, on my pages again ... CayCay

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/21/2025 8:47:00 AM

Love the message in your verse CayCay you conveyed so much in seven lines. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2025 10:03:00 PM

I'm glad my verse brought you poem-love, what more could any poet desire? I appreciate your uplifting comments, Tom ... CayCay

Karen Jones

Date: 3/21/2025 7:46:00 AM

I love your quote! Great contest entry CayCay! Good luck ‘

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2025 10:04:00 PM

I SEE your generous comments and thank you ... CayCay

Lin Lane

Date: 3/21/2025 7:42:00 AM

Good morning, CayCay. Your lines make a lovely read... faith builder to those who believe. A charming write.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2025 10:11:00 PM

Yes, faith builder to those who believe rainbows are God's promise to never flood the earth again. I love many who firmly believe that. I'm glad you found my write charming and thank you for coming by ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2025 7:34:00 AM

- Beautiful seven lines CayCay ... I love to see the rainbow ... it brings good luck :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/21/2025 10:16:00 PM

Thank you for the word, 'beautiful.' I love rainbows, too, and pray they aren't something man will completely destroy. I suspect that centuries ago, they were even more brilliant and vivid in a much more vivid and brilliant post-rain sky ... CayCay