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"DECEPTION QUEEN" FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 20 APRIL 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

False crown with pride wears On vanity's throne she sits Hypocrisy reigns! © Demetrios Trifiatis 20 April 2017

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Miraj Raha

Date: 4/21/2017 11:21:00 AM

Sir do you mean the rose?

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/21/2017 12:01:00 PM

Not ate all my friend, Miraj for the rose doesn't conceal its thorns! In this case I mean specific persons who try to excel with whatever means they can in return to be recognized even as false Queens!

Anil Deo

Date: 4/20/2017 7:49:00 PM

Those who raise lovely flowers cannot walk away from its fragrances! Eirene

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/21/2017 8:33:00 AM

You so sweet and your heart has this divine fragrance my friend, Anil! God bless you! Thank you!

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/20/2017 11:21:00 AM

Very nice haiku ... Indeed hypocrisy rules , we like or dislike ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/20/2017 11:58:00 AM

Unfortunately does my friend, Probir! Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Chris Green

Date: 4/20/2017 10:31:00 AM

I think I know what this is referring too but I live in the U.S. and here we told our female hypocrite no thanks in the last election.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/20/2017 11:55:00 AM

You ought to know for whom it is written! It is so obvious! If the Queen sees it certainly will understand it is for her! haha! Thank you my friend Chris!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/20/2017 7:55:00 AM

- We find hypocrisy everywhere, my friend - Great written - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/20/2017 7:59:00 AM

That is the worst thing: That we find it everywhere, my dear friend, Anne-Lise! At least we must raise our voice and try to bring some form of justice, somehow! Thank you so much for visiting and commenting dearest friend! Hugs!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2017 3:40:00 AM

Very true words indeed Demetrios. (It made me smile as Flo sent me a crown as queen of poop...but I don't wear it when I sit on the throne lol) :-) hugs Jan xx7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/20/2017 7:48:00 AM

My dear, Jan, who dared to demote you to the rank of a Queen? You are an Empress! Haha! Thank you for lovely visit and comment! Hugs xxx