Daystar

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Poetry/Acrostic/Daystar
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1664-496-08
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, August 09, 2024
For the Inernational Contest, This Acrostic or That Acrostic
Sponsor, Miranda Hawley, Judgd 08/17/2024

Honorable Mention

"Now the bright morning-star . . . days
harbinger, comes dancing from the east."

Quote by _John Milton

Daystar is a poetic word for the sun,
And also another word for the morning star; when
Yellow shines in the sky at sunrise and sunset, with
Spiritual glow to impart and to comfort us.
The eye of heaven, it is said to be, or perhaps just
A planet called Venus;
Radiating like a lamp to light our way on Earth.

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/21/2024 6:03:00 PM

Your Y and S lines are the best in your poem. You have some colorful illustrations you have painted with your words. Congratulations on your HM in my contest.

Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2024 7:12:00 PM