Daystar

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Poetry/Acrostic/Daystar
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1664-496-08
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, August 09, 2024
For the Inernational Contest, This Acrostic or That Acrostic
Sponsor, Miranda Hawley, Judgd 08/17/2024

Honorable Mention

"Now the bright morning-star . . . days
harbinger, comes dancing from the east."

Quote by _John Milton

Daystar is a poetic word for the sun, And also another word for the morning star; when Yellow shines in the sky at sunrise and sunset, with Spiritual glow to impart and to comfort us. The eye of heaven, it is said to be, or perhaps just A planet called Venus; Radiating like a lamp to light our way on Earth.

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/21/2024 6:03:00 PM

Your Y and S lines are the best in your poem. You have some colorful illustrations you have painted with your words. Congratulations on your HM in my contest.

Constance La France
Date: 8/21/2024 7:12:00 PM

Miranda, thank you for the contest and the honorable mention, and the compliment and congratulations, Constance

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 8/17/2024 6:23:00 PM

Daystar: Source of light and heat without which we could not live. Amazing, I had not heard the expression, the eye of heaven...but I like it.

Constance La France
Date: 8/19/2024 4:08:00 AM

Reason, thank you for the comment, I like the the eye of heaven expression also, Constance

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/10/2024 7:24:00 AM

Informative and still beautiful and poetic! How'd u do that!? ;) xo

Constance La France
Date: 8/12/2024 1:31:00 PM

Crystol, thank you for the comment and compliment, Constance

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/9/2024 2:48:00 PM

Very enjoyed read dear lovely sweet Constance :-) I love it.

Constance La France
Date: 8/9/2024 2:50:00 PM

Abdullah, thank you so much for the awesome compliment on my poem and me, Constance