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I was a bed and mattress tester, a dream job like that of a yellow moon. I tested the comfort of beds, pillows, etc., for night is ever coming soon. I studied sleep patterns too, like vivid rainbow's colored, striped design. I also appraised sleep products, as botanists do royal rose's genetic line. I rated beds for luxury hotels, and mattresses for their medical benefits; As grape butterflies keep blooms yielding, with ensuing riotous clematis. Familiar faces of friends were welcome, in waning shadows of afternoon, In fancy, fragrance hours of summer fever, when vivid petals are strewn. Fervent family would fain see me frequently, like fireflies adore evening; As fiery noon loves featured robin matinee, when the clouds are leaving. I lived in the house of summer, where blooms told the story of their lives; And midnight captured lace moon magic, like love which parting survives! Silken scents were rampant on my street, as sapphire is prevalent to sky, When Sweet Williams startled and stunned, in gorgeous shades gone awry. Noiseless nightshade was climbing, in narcissistic, poisonous self defense, When nostalgic neighbors called near dawn, for a break in plum suspense. Skeleton flowers had become deceased, having made contact with water, Then turning from white to transparent, like the red devil's only daughter! 'String of frogs' plants were jumping June, in summer joy, quite habitual; And 'regal birdflowers' ruled gardens, green hummingbirds frozen in ritual. My neighbor's child practiced the drums daily, and was quite good, actually; Like the songbirds of amber high noon, singing the jade good life, factually. As I sat besieged by summer one day, on my porch of dreams, I drowsed; Like honeybees encased in sweetness, in rooms where liquid joy is housed. The drumbeat of my neighbor's instrument, permeated my tranquil reverie; And beautiful bluebirds sang in tune, strident notes of lazy, summer destiny. Crimson butterflies also graced that vision, along with a fantasy of flowers, In orange, pink, red and rich yellow, like heady optimism that never sours. Hummingbirds and bees hummed along, with colors and sounds in motion, As the east wind gyrated lustily, like a graceful ship upon an emerald ocean. There was a quickening of my heartbeat, dancing to a wild summer dream; Like the last purple rose of the season, with its onwards, marching regime!

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Date: 4/16/2024 7:41:00 PM
Your penultimate line took us all back to the '40's and '50's when that 'wild rhythm' would of a sudden overtake a film's soundtrack. ~ Bob Hope, Jack Benny, and Dorothy Lamour
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/16/2024 8:11:00 PM
I'm very happy to hear that line held pleasant associations for you, Gershon. Thank you for the uplift. :)
Date: 4/14/2024 8:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write.  Crimson butterflies/flowers, In orange, pink, red and rich yellow/Hummingbirds and bees sound so lovely... Have a wonderful week....................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/14/2024 9:43:00 PM
Heartfelt thanks for the loveliness of your comment, Paula. Blessings.
Date: 4/13/2024 1:58:00 PM
Dear evelyn, you have a way with words and storytelling using metaphors and alliterations to paint imagery and to deliver something that would leave readers in awe of your poetic prowess!this is no exception! So many lines stood out for me! From skeleton flowers to crimson butterflies and your use of colors as always is so very artistic! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2024 8:50:00 PM
You are such a talented writer that your words are high praise indeed, Ink. Thank you so much for your expressions of appreciation.
Date: 4/13/2024 9:17:00 AM
Hey Evelyn.. This is a delightful journey through the seasons and sensations of life! Your vivid imagery paints a picture of a world alive with colour, scent, and sound, where every moment is imbued with its own unique charm. From the comfort of beds to the fragrance of summer blooms, you've captured the essence of each experience with such poetic grace. The rhythm of your words carries you along like a gentle breeze through a summer garden, where every detail comes alive in the mind's eye.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2024 8:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Silent One. I love reading your warm comments. They are so rewarding. I'm glad this tale struck a chord with you. Best wishes always, Evelyn
Date: 4/13/2024 8:41:00 AM
Crimson butterflies also graced that vision, along with a fantasy of flowers, Enjoyed your descriptions throughout, Evelyn. ---In orange, pink, red and rich yellow, like heady optimism that never sours----Hummingbirds and bees hummed along, with colors and sounds in motion, As the east wind gyrated lustily, like a graceful ship upon an emerald ocean--simply beautiful, my friend.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2024 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. Your awesome comment gives my spirits a lift, and makes me eager to tell more tales. Blessings, my friend. :)
Date: 4/13/2024 5:46:00 AM
You should have seen me struggling last night for I could not sleep. A powerful Saturday missive that I always look forward to reading.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2024 8:33:00 PM
I slept poorly last night, too. I'm glad you enjoyed this tale, though. Many thanks for the compliment. :)
Date: 4/13/2024 4:00:00 AM
Very beautiful in its descriptive wonder, Evelyn:)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/13/2024 8:28:00 PM
Your gracious compliment has made my day, Joanna. Thank you. :)

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