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May- 7- 2024
 Delphic, Disaster, Dauntless, Words Poetry Contest
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“Put on the dauntless spirit of resolution”. ~ By William Shakespeare Meet this dweller of the icy continent Among the few, he is the chief occupant Out in that territory, it is freezing cold With nothing but a sea of whiteness to behold In this far stretching desert of ice Live the emperor penguins wise They are birds erect, not designed for flight Neatly dressed in suits of black and white They remind us of nuns dressed in white With hoods in black and souls contrite The penguins thrive in snow and sleet That to them is never an easy feat Over the ice they smoothly waddle And in water with flippers, they paddle Strangely, it is in the peak of winter they breed When nature goes scarce with food to feed After a period of intimate courtship Into responsible parenthood they slip The female lays a single egg Never one more, even if we beg Right away she goes on a feeding spree Appointing her husband as designee To guard over the egg and keep close watch Until the young one is ripe to hatch Do you know how it incubates the egg? He balances it on the feet of his leg Till the young one is out, he refuses to eat or drink A rare sacrifice of which we can hardly think In this period, he thrives solely on body fat And in course, he loses half his weight At last, from the egg, when the chick is out It is not allowed to go to the ice direct But is locked inside the parent’s brood pouch Where the little one feels comfy as on a couch If it ever dares to venture out It will freeze to death, no doubt The emperors thus live on the razor edge of life And their lives with challenges are rife Yet with dauntless resolution, they face their fate And against all adversities, their life they celebrate With their densely packed layers of plumage They keep their bodies from serious damage When comes the blasting breath of the blizzards As a precaution to skim over the hazards, From their territories, they rally en bloc together Huddling tight for warmth in the biting weather Don’t you think the penguin is an emperor Who subdues his hostile territory with prudent care? A longer version of the bird’s dauntless endeavor is our life An arduous climb through perils, pain and strife!

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Date: 5/9/2024 1:14:00 AM
I always though penguins were cute , now as i read this sweet valsa, i learn so much more about penguins and how they breed and when they do along with so much more in the most eloquent manner youv educated us readers, so creative are your rhymes too here and i love how you mentioned nuns , i always thought some muslim women how they dress do look like that too. Similar. Because of the color black. This is so refreshing and so insightful a fave for me because i enjoyed reading and learning. BOL
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Date: 5/7/2024 4:17:00 PM
until I read your poem, I had no idea how dauntless penguins could be. What marvelous creatures you've depicted. I, too, didn't know that the mother penguin searched for food while papa penguin took care of the nest. You gave us delightful information in such beautiful, poetic form. You're truly a gifted poet. I can feel your kind spirit in the poems you write. Have a splendid evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/7/2024 9:59:00 AM
Nice informative poem on penguines. I like Joe's comparison with Taylor Swift.
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Date: 5/7/2024 9:09:00 AM
"Don’t you think the penguin is an emperor Who subdues his hostile territory with prudent care? A longer version of the bird’s dauntless endeavor is our life An arduous climb through perils, pain and strife!" -- lovely, wonderful informative poem. I learned a lot. I think children would do better if taught to emulate the penguin instead of Taylor Swift.
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Date: 5/7/2024 8:43:00 AM
Dear Valsa, You beautifully capture the essence of their parental devotion and sacrificial love, highlighting the extraordinary lengths to which they go to ensure the survival of their offspring. The description of the male penguin's unwavering commitment to protecting the egg, even at the cost of his well-being, is particularly moving. Like these resilient birds, we, too, must navigate through adversity with dauntless resolution and unwavering determination. You have inspired us to face life's challenges with courage and grace. Loved It! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 5/7/2024 5:47:00 AM
Dear Valsa, This is an exemplary poem depicting the lives of "dauntless" Penguins. Sounds like you have done some research on this topic - it is really incredible how the father-penguin protects the eggs, while mother looks for food! Your poem is outstanding with detailed descriptions of the life of these amazing creatures! Love and warm wishes, Dearest Poet~
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Date: 5/7/2024 4:07:00 AM
i am always fascinated by nature, penguins adapt themselves to coldness, no one else can do that, what an original poem, i learnt a lot yann
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Date: 5/7/2024 12:20:00 AM
Amazing creatures, I don't like it too cold but they take it to another level. Enjoyable read Valsa. Tom
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