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Dad's Rose

Alluring rose, Lost some petals, Little withered, But still whiffing her odor All he said to her, That one day she will bloom, For thorns are all she needs, For it’s in her stars, To be a lover’s delight To be a wedding’s wreath, To be last gift of a living to dead Alluring rose, Lost some petals, And he stayed there, She needed him but water and sun For gems of purest rays serene, She is born to blush unseen, She will She will be a delight And all then a father will do, Is seeing her off from aisle with smile….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/27/2019 8:59:00 PM
Lovely, Shiraz.
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Date: 6/3/2019 12:09:00 AM
Exceptional piece.
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Date: 11/10/2015 10:36:00 AM
Hi Friend, have not seen you on here in forever. A beautiful poem. Shiraz, you paint a beautiful canvas to be. Blooming as one. LINDA
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Date: 12/14/2014 2:34:00 PM
beautifully penned - I adore the final line especially:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 12/15/2014 12:04:00 PM
Thank you Jan for dropping by :-)

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