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ninety years old, dad still beneath the shelter hut unique storm of brawls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/10/2021 10:19:00 AM
Interesting look at an aged man, Lasaad. I wonder about his "brawls."
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Date: 7/10/2021 5:06:00 AM
The elderly do not tolerate heat well, and I am speaking from experience......Unique haiku, I like it......
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Date: 7/9/2021 10:09:00 PM
Brawling in this heat will kill you.
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