Crystal Clear

drinking from stream still not satisfied what am I thirsting for

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 7:03:00 PM

hmm, I could think of a few things :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/10/2014 7:02:00 AM

;0)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2012 10:51:00 AM

One of the best ones.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2012 12:54:00 PM

Thanks

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/29/2012 2:44:00 PM

I like you Q-ku's. Interesting! :) Tanya

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/29/2012 3:04:00 PM

Thanks, I hope you give it a try.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

Date: 11/5/2012 9:35:00 AM

Good rhythm indeed! :) Hanitra

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/5/2012 9:38:00 AM

Thanks, Hanitra Did you get my Soup mail?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/3/2012 10:23:00 PM

this is a cool questionku!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/4/2012 6:54:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Still playing around, hopefully it will catch on. Give it a try and let me know. 3 lines 4 5 6 end with a Question.