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Cry of a Donkey

Hi, this is Donkey ! an animal with no complain either you love me or disdain I am sad but not mad as you think of me and you dont want to be called by my name for you its a shame ! how cruel is your approach yet you will encroach upon my world to carry the loads of your dirty clothes this is the irony of my agony that I am born like this wish I could be a fish of your pond but alas ! I am just an animal with an ugly sound ! as I am not strong so you will prolong the insult on my community cant i live with dignity????????????????????????????? delete poem this is not a donkey's perpective but i relate myself with this animal too...sorry again!

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Date: 3/14/2016 5:03:00 PM
Someone remarked that this is witty; I look at it with serious eyes musing on those who are quick to find faults in others while failing to notice their own! I also see the gap between upper and lower classes; racism, and people stuck with stigmas...Of course, no deleting, Smriti!! ~ Warm regards // paul
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:17:00 PM
* Paul*..plz forgive me for wrongly addressing you ..
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Date: 3/14/2016 9:15:00 PM
Dear Poem...finally I have someone who understood this poem..however, i still appreciate others here too for reviewing my work..I belong to a very conservative society but i have always been a rebel...( quite proud of what I am ) You bring smile on my face ...as always...Love red
Date: 1/5/2012 8:53:00 AM
such a beautiful woman and WHO or what has colored your mind to feel so DARK..so black....try to get away from those negative people! Thanks for the nice comment on Cherry Red my poem. Light & Love
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:17:00 PM
A lot of truth in this piece Smriti..
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Date: 5/29/2011 8:16:00 AM
:D :D.....................nice one madam.........really great :D.............. POOR DONKEY :D
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Date: 5/29/2011 2:14:00 AM
wow! what a mighty poem,, and concept to what animal you relate too... a great poem,..p.d.
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Date: 5/26/2011 4:00:00 AM
Vow Smriti, poetic weave giving voice to Donkey. Don + Key two good attributes adding up to ??????. Thanks for comments on Attributes. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:08:00 PM
humorous write Smriti and enjoyed your wit in this piece luv.. don't delete please..
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Date: 5/24/2011 3:44:00 PM
hahahah, funny write , nice personification, smriti
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:46:00 PM
I heard another name for donkey was jacka-- , don't think it means anything bad but.. I wouldn't wanna have anything in common with an animal with a name like that. Enjoyed reading today have a good one.
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Date: 5/24/2011 10:30:00 AM
Nice personification of a donkey.Enjoyed.
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