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tears on her pillow refuse to dry only her piano knows her pain sitting in her gown her fatigued fingers break her silence as they weep until crimson drops stains her keys yet no one hears her sorrowful serenade of shame a fool for love lamenting his lack of loyalty her eyes flood dripping onto ivory rectangles of regret but they wash away crimson blemishes for her to play vividly and vigorously harmony of her hands play away the pangs of heartbreak her heart knows this symphony could end in tears but she smiles believing there is always hope for a better tomorrow

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Date: 1/28/2024 8:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Silent One! The poem is so beautifully painful and aching. "as they weep until crimson drops stains her keys" I'm glad there is a ray of hope...
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Date: 1/28/2024 7:55:00 AM
Very creative write this is dear silent one, your way with words always amazes me and leaves me speechless, and the character youv described here sounds like a pianist that finds comfort through keys kismet, anyhow i love many lines in this but the most is “ rectangles of regrets” and the ending is beautiful! A person that is able to see light i see through your words. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 1/27/2024 8:03:00 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your podium win, dear friend, SO
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Date: 4/11/2021 12:45:00 PM
Oh the music and the words makes such a great combination. Well composed lines. Great indeed!! Sunita UPD.
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Date: 4/6/2021 8:50:00 AM
Beautiful words my friend. This speaks of a lovely and talented person who puts all her emotions into her art. Now her art soothes her injured spirit as she plays. Lovely God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/30/2021 4:31:00 PM
Silent One, we miss you. Please don't remain silent.
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Date: 3/26/2021 7:14:00 PM
I miss you, my poetic friend! Hope you come back and grace us with your beautiful poetic talent. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 3/14/2021 6:07:00 PM
You have such drama in your poetry. Hope all is well. Thanks for your recent comment. I have been away for a while working my own fingers to the bone. TTYL.
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Date: 3/14/2021 1:35:00 PM
Silent One, The music is so nice in this one. I wish it would last forever. Well, not really, we all need a change now and then. -Richard
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Date: 3/1/2021 11:39:00 AM
Where are you my dear poetic friend? I miss you and your magnificent writing. Hope you are well and hope to see you back here soon. Sincerely, Elaine
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Date: 2/28/2021 5:22:00 AM
wish you can continue writing soon.
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Date: 2/27/2021 7:34:00 AM
Waal
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Date: 2/27/2021 4:55:00 AM
Loved this heartfelt piece my friend. Hope you are well...
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Date: 2/25/2021 8:55:00 PM
“rectangles of regret” “harmony of her hands”...such brilliant alliterative descriptions, and a lovely, emotive poem that so many of us enjoy. I hope all is well, Silent, and hopefully you are just taking a restorative break from PS (I am, at least), visiting now and again. I am lacking inspiration as of late..cyber hugs go your way. I look forward to your return.. :)
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Date: 2/21/2021 9:34:00 AM
The heart of a true poet my friend, bleeding for your art ! It conjures up such vivid imagery. As I am an E. A. Poe and T S Eliot fan, my mind is immediately transported there. It is the great strength of your writing which enables the mind to make these associations ! Kim
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Date: 2/17/2021 3:48:00 PM
Hi SO. very sad story with a hopeful twist at the end. Very well written. Thank you for stopping by my poem page back in November. It's still the most current comment I've received. Lol :-)
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Date: 2/12/2021 2:44:00 AM
Silent One, why so silent?
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Date: 1/31/2021 8:54:00 AM
I don’t know why but my mind wanders to Delta Dawn as I read this piece. Well expressed as always my friend. I hope you find your way back here. Myself I have not been spending much time here but am back now and again. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 1/29/2021 9:20:00 AM
Was wondering where you went to. I see this is still the last post you made. I hope you are well, silent One.
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Date: 1/21/2021 1:53:00 AM
There is always hope for a better tomorrow,beautifully penned.
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Date: 1/14/2021 8:11:00 PM
Hello SO, missing you and your uplifting poetry... hope you are well in this New Year:)
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Date: 1/9/2021 10:58:00 AM
When one feels lost -Hope is the last fight to live and love before surrendering. I could picture this lady somehow.
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Date: 1/7/2021 8:55:00 AM
At least she did not give in to the beating her heart took... a very hard thing to do. Hope you're still safe over there S1
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Date: 1/5/2021 10:25:00 AM
I hope all is well with you. Miss seeing your poems. love phyl
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Date: 1/5/2021 8:35:00 AM
Another creative write. You are a wonderful writer. Please write more. Enjoy your day with blessings..................
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