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Cowboys

My brother and I shared a bedroom With cowboys on every wall. Though we’re three years apart Our connection did start While our baby bro slept down the hall. My memories don’t have much info Of the time that we spent in that room, But since we got along I don’t think I’d be wrong Saying we were content (I’d assume). When the crib for our sib got confining, Rooms were switched; gender came into play. I would guess that our mother Thought brother and brother Would both take to the cowboy display. So I got my own room, but I wonder, Did I miss my first roommate a bit? Maybe yes, maybe no; It was so long ago, But years later, I have to admit That a kinship formed so very early, If you’re lucky, holds fast in the heart. For your birthday today, Burt, though you’re far away, Think of cowboys, where we had our start.

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Date: 2/14/2024 4:00:00 PM
I shared a room with my one year younger brother… No cowboys, but I do have a small scar on my forehead from where my brother threw a metal Batmobile at me. Enjoyed your sibling revelry, Ilene. Terry
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Date: 2/13/2024 11:09:00 AM
Eight years between me and my roomie bro...and I didn't enjoy them a bit. He complained about everything I did. I love the "cowboy-covered walls" imagery, Ilene...and everything else about this nostalgic piece.
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Date: 2/13/2024 2:16:00 AM
- My brother and I shared a bedroom ... and there were 6 years between us ... I didn't like it at all, Ilene :) - hugs
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Date: 2/12/2024 5:31:00 PM
A surprise at the end. Happy Birthday Burt. I'm happy you had a warm, loving family. Your poem is great.
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Date: 2/12/2024 12:23:00 AM
I am sure Burt had a lump in his throat when he read your charming birthday rhyme, aww what wonderful memories,I wonder what he recalls when you moved to your own room and how he felt. You are so lucky to have had such a close bond. my sibling has had no contact with us since 2015 except a vile letter a few years ago, disowning all the family - such is life eh! hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/11/2024 6:26:00 PM
very sweet memories, and original chamber for a kid, i think there was so much love from your parents, thanks for the "sweet" poem
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