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Courageous Flower

A tiny, lively flower, in a lovely garden, - danced - in the easy, breezy wind, blinking at the sky.   A gentle drizzle moistened its petals, with soft drops (one after another), and the flower sang - a swan’s song -   Oh! the drizzle wore a heavy dress and bleeding petals fell - one by one.   Rain stopped. The empty stem yet remained, staring at the sky... Oct. 30, 2020 Completely your choice (35) Any theme Any Form Poetry Contest Contest sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 10/31/2020 9:25:00 AM
Congrats on your place in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 10/31/2020 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations, Sky Moon, on your placement in Brian Strand's contest!!
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Date: 10/30/2020 8:49:00 PM
The fragile beauty of your poem is sad yet enchanting, Sky. Lovely poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/30/2020 12:17:00 PM
Hello Sky Moon, so nice to meet you. the flower lost its petals. So sad. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 10/30/2020 11:47:00 AM
I'm seeing a lot of poems about petals at the moment ..fragile but beautiful
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