Conspicuous Stars

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As I looked down the line Conspicuous stars faded away The suns gradually disappear And black swallows further Every Glimmer Of Radiance My sword is drawn Struggle against resentment Safeguarding the cosmos And every single one of its inhabitants Apathetically exposed to the left Simple downtime now Prior to the depravity of man recovers and reappears. Written: May 22, 2023

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/23/2023 5:46:00 AM

Stunning stellar images in your photo and your poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2023 1:59:00 PM

Yes, some terrible things are going to happen to this earth and the heavens, but it is coming and there is nothing that can stop it. Maybe slow it down but it is written. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara