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Clouds of July

It's been a cloudy, flat July Confined by brittle yellow grass Crooked fingers of tattered brass Misty draped mornings, damply dry A breath of heat escapes the chill To stir dull blooms, waxy and still Void of colors of butterflies From edges of my eyes pass through Memories in orange and blue Summer rays in meager supply Warm rain thinly dabs the willow Barely touching branches below Til grace of evening stars comply by length of lavender twilight Reviving my soul with delight It's been a cloudy, flat July Misty draped mornings, damply dry Void of colors of butterflies Summer rays in meager supply Til grace of evening stars comply 7/26/20 Entered in 'Constanza - Old or New' contest Judged 09/05/20

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Date: 10/1/2020 7:30:00 AM
An excellent write Michelle, congrats on placing this time 'round!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/2/2020 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, John, much appreciated~
Date: 7/31/2020 11:36:00 AM
Hi Michelle, This is a good entry for the contest theme. My months have been “ dull” since March. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/31/2020 5:27:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, Alexis, and glad to see you posting again, hope you are safe and well.
Date: 7/27/2020 7:26:00 PM
Yes, both can be a challenge (July and writing Constanzas) but you handled the poetic obstacles with apparent ease and lucidity. By the time the sun sets, we are so ready for "by length of lavender twilight / Reviving my soul with delight". As does your poetry.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/31/2020 5:26:00 PM
Summer twilight, like I mentioned in another poem, is one of my favorite things - it is the reward at the end of a stuffy humid afternoon! Hope you are enjoying your summer!
Date: 7/26/2020 9:57:00 PM
Wonderful imagery dipped in the divine poetic lake.. Great entry Michelle.. Good luck..
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/31/2020 5:26:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment, Jenish, appreciate it-
Date: 7/26/2020 4:49:00 PM
You have so poetically, so delicately informed us that ~ July's sucked. Oh, I just couldn't resist. Truth be told, this is a delightful read, and here's to a winner in the contest, Michelle! Best always, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/31/2020 5:24:00 PM
July is not a vacation month for me, it is just awfully hot and humid! Thanks for your encouraging comment, gw-
Date: 7/26/2020 3:29:00 PM
Wonderful description in images of July, Michelle, in this hard to execute form. Well done, indeed!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/26/2020 3:39:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, much appreciated-
Date: 7/26/2020 3:19:00 PM
what a delightful poem Michelle, I am still editing my effort, its quite a challenging form, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan x
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/26/2020 3:26:00 PM
Yes, it took a few rewrites (I even made a couple of last minute revisions when I was posting it!) Thank you, look forward to reading yours!

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