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Clouds Cry

He looked toward the east, to the angry, darkened sky, then the clouds cry.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2009 4:54:00 PM

Interesting work. Sara

Fide Erken

Date: 5/22/2009 8:04:00 AM

Nice poem.I like it.Love,Fide

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/7/2009 12:03:00 PM

Great description, I like the tone you used. Amazing work...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/30/2009 10:14:00 AM

clouds cry,will they ever smile?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/27/2009 8:35:00 AM

Love the way you describe the approaching storm, Frank.

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/24/2009 7:53:00 AM

Only a god can be represented here, the mystic in you, Frank, cries out with such power here. Love and peace, mankind

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/24/2009 4:01:00 AM

I wonder if we can be so deeply troubled that nature would reflect it. I'm blessed with being a naturally happy person so my skies are blue and sunny,,,I bet you get struck by lightning a lot don't ya lovey?

Jay Loveless

Date: 3/23/2009 9:35:00 AM

Cute, simple, and i like it. Thankyou for the comment. Jese

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/23/2009 6:21:00 AM

wonderfully pensive, thoughtful, I like it! Jim

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/23/2009 5:57:00 AM

Hey frank :) Well isn't it amazing how nature, the clouds itself can release beauty for us to see when we are unable to express our own? I can remeber as a teen, having to be so passive, yet I would walk in down pours all the time... I just had to do something... Sometimes life and the people in it, can really push our buttons.. blessings to you my friend, with love, Lucinda

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/23/2009 4:59:00 AM

This is a very interesting Haiku...love the fact that the clouds cry...nice image.