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In silence, a gaze skyward, Where a myriad toppling Glitters of sun dusts dance. Behind clutch of hands, Or is it bark, befuddled. Head resting, obliterated words, Come! stumbled form Forget! lips and sound. Remember! legs entwined, Hold tightly! from behind, As if bark on the ground. One hand lifts a palm Raised to the sun, shut down Tired eyes. Thoughts disjointed Remember the name, a name. Tree oh tree, it is the same, Remember me, this sore Body was once cogitative. Give in, fuse! Cling to this wood as final. Hear a distant name, Faint familiar sound, same As once called, a wall Plummet into the sun Too bright, a hand closes softly painful eyes. Rumble of voices far away too close by Hands tear twigs and twines, Branches and leaves. Inside something grieves, And hears: it will be fine. Safe from my tree, can’t stay. Tree, oh tree, they set me free! *** Februari 1, 2017

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Date: 2/2/2017 12:04:00 AM
I will go out on a limb here, and simply say beautiful poem!
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Darren White
Date: 2/2/2017 12:16:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, that limb yeah :)
Date: 2/1/2017 8:03:00 PM
You are free! <3 Free to shine and share your heart here with friends. Your voice is so clear and so, so strong and powerful.
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Darren White
Date: 2/2/2017 12:14:00 AM
I am dear friend :) Thank you <3
Date: 2/1/2017 5:56:00 PM
Oh Darren. I'm rubbing off on you...beautiful. I don't have time to structure right now. what a replacement.......,nnnniiicccceee.
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Darren White
Date: 2/2/2017 12:13:00 AM
Holly, thank you! Structure not needed :)
Date: 2/1/2017 5:43:00 PM
Duir! For a start, I love the image you chose to accommodate this poem! Now, the poem itself! Wonderfully different style I have never seen you do! And I do believe you are conquering your inner demons, one by one you shall face them all! This poem speaks to me and is unique indeed!
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Darren White
Date: 2/2/2017 12:11:00 AM
Budgie, You are so... SO.... close! Inner and outer :) I never did this the way I did here, I agree. I made this as abstract as I possibly could.
Date: 2/1/2017 3:32:00 PM
Not sure the meaning of it all. It's very deep, like the roots of a tree! But anyway, it was nice to read you today!
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Darren White
Date: 2/2/2017 12:11:00 AM
Exactly that Andrea, the roots of a tree, it's strange forms. Thank you
Date: 2/1/2017 1:54:00 PM
Whoa Darren, this was very deep, I sense a definite need in this, a longing or maybe even a fear. Not sure but still, it was very cool.
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Darren White
Date: 2/1/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, you are allowed to make it what you like to make it :)

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