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clementine honey

clementine honey the buzzing bees beholding a budding lily i’m adoring audible crooning of colorful bloom

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Date: 5/12/2024 1:07:00 PM
Kim, great salute to natural pollination. There's a lot to enjoy going on if we only know where to look.
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Date: 5/9/2024 1:09:00 PM
Liked your tanka- very springtime
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Date: 5/9/2024 5:07:00 AM
outstanding and just a pretty Tanka. Have a pleasant day, Kim. hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/9/2024 5:04:00 AM
A beautiful poem Kim. ---audible crooning of colorful bloom--perfectly poetic, my friend.
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Date: 5/9/2024 4:44:00 AM
Yes. Love the surprise of hearing the bees, and love all the alliterative double bubbling. J :)
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Date: 5/9/2024 3:55:00 AM
- A lovely tanka, Kim :) - hugs
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