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Chilly Autumns Smile

Dancing amber beams under open chest of sky season's aurora dimple on dew drops emerald meadows reflect autumn's chilly smile

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2013 4:10:00 PM

this is really pretty!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/25/2013 1:19:00 PM

Thanks a lot, always.... Loved always, bl

Shirley Candy

Date: 9/24/2013 12:59:00 PM

Beautiful chained haiku..BL. Love the imagery you've created here...well done my friend..thank you for sharing this.. :)))

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/24/2013 1:35:00 PM

Many thanks my PS friend for your sweet visit with sweet comment. Loved always, bl

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/24/2013 12:53:00 PM

This is good. I am happy that Autumn is here already. Go check Misty Day. I gave you an answer. have a nice day.... Lucilla

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/24/2013 12:56:00 PM

Thanks firstly. I have already commented on that. Please see my friend. Loved your comment. Always, bl