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Caught In a Cycle

morning fresh alive bursting promising inviting sunshine birds moonglow stars weighing menacing stifling weary spent nightfall Submitted on June 8, 2019 for contest SPARKING DIAMONDS sponsored by JOSEPH MAY

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Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 6/26/2019 1:53:00 PM

Nice one, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thanks, Geoffrey. Much appreciated.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 6/26/2019 12:48:00 PM

Congrats Line. Another well done poem.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/26/2019 4:18:00 PM

Thanks, Jeanne, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Joseph May

Date: 6/25/2019 9:26:00 PM

Nicely done Line, Congrats on your win..

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/25/2019 9:51:00 PM

Thank you so much for hosting this fun contest, Joseph.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/25/2019 8:42:00 PM

Nicely done, Line:-) Congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/25/2019 9:51:00 PM

Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/25/2019 7:00:00 PM

Line congrats on your placement!;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/25/2019 9:52:00 PM

Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/9/2019 3:06:00 AM

Beautiful, my Maestro Poet friend! I am sure it will go to the top.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/9/2019 9:17:00 AM

Thanks for your vote of confidence, Caren. Much appreciated.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 6/8/2019 4:09:00 PM

This is brilliant Line, surely a winner? With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/8/2019 4:29:00 PM

You are too kind. LOL as usual the competition is fierce, Ann.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/8/2019 11:59:00 AM

a breathtaking Diamante - well penned Line! Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/8/2019 12:34:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and compliment, Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2019 10:24:00 AM

EXCELLENT use of the form. Best I have seen here yet for this contest!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/8/2019 10:51:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. It's still early. LOL