Carnation Yellow - a Haiku

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Carnation Yellow - A Haiku sunshiny sunlight shall carnation yellow flies pollinates the bee beauty to the eyes good smells aroma so nice carnation yellow 6/7/19

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/9/2019 3:47:00 AM

It is my theory that God loves the carnations the best, because they last the longest after being cut, even if they have become dyed a different color. Nice one.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2019 3:37:00 AM

Carnations of any shade or colour are my favourite flowers James, a sweet tribute:-) hugs Jan xx

James Edward Lee Sr.
Date: 6/8/2019 9:45:00 AM

Ever so thank-full, thank you Jan :)