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Filch sweet treasure Filch my cache Cache in gut now cache your hide Hide dear brother hide your skull skull so empty skull obtuse obtuse to pain Obtuse maneuver Maneuver wisely maneuver quickly Quickly dodge Quickly duck Duck my swing Duck your head Head for door head for hell Hell won’t have you hell rejects Rejects your kind rejects too wicked wicked and vile wicked transgressor Transgressor supreme transgressor remiss remiss to insight insight that guides insight that condemns condemns injustice condemns betrayal betrayal of bonds betrayal of love love for kin love for stability Stability gone stability a dream Dream of your ruin Dream of escape escape from this storm storm that seeks vengeance storm on your form Form your words wisely Form them with shame Shame I must maim you shame you're so lame Lame you ---------------------- 10/17/19 For If I were your Brother Poetry Contest Sponsored by Bobby May Coincidentally, I chose the blitz format to accomplish my mission here, for the definition of blitz has everything to do with a vigorous attack, or to destroy or demolish. Unplanned but adds to the fun, for me at least ;)

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/2/2019 1:17:00 PM

If I were your sibling, I would give you half of my Halloween loot just to keep on your good side, lol. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs

Hello There
Date: 11/2/2019 4:22:00 PM

Hahaha! So funny, Cecilia :) I was tough, but a very gentle soul. Anything to protect others, but I wouldn't really beat him for stealing my grub ;) Now, if he stole from someone else, that would be an entirely different story! Thank you so much for your fun visit and congratulations <3

Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:12:00 AM

I love the form. Great write HT. Congratulations on your placement. ~Charlie

Hello There
Date: 11/1/2019 1:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie. I knew it might be a little intense, but I had to go for it ~ My own brothers would have expected it from me, and laughed, of course ;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/31/2019 6:56:00 PM

Congratulations...told you Bobby would probably enjoy this one :)

Hello There
Date: 10/31/2019 9:04:00 PM

Ah, thanks, girl ;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/30/2019 9:51:00 AM

- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest - I enjoy reading your story, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hello There
Date: 10/30/2019 2:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise! I'm glad you enjoyed a little insanity ;) Lol. hugs :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 8:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement

Hello There
Date: 10/30/2019 2:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Bobby ~ It was a blast participating. And no one was actually harmed during the creation of this piece ;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/24/2019 12:58:00 PM

You've put the Luftwaffe to shame and to rout! What a blitzkrieg. Whoa! ~ Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/30/2019 2:46:00 PM

Back with congrats on your win in the contest, H.T. I guessed your blitz broke through Bobby's defenses and caused him to erupt in gales of laughter. Smiles, Gershon

Hello There
Date: 10/24/2019 4:35:00 PM

Oh my gosh ~ you've got me giggling, Gershon... So funny, and thank you so much. This piece was great fun to put together, though a monoku was what I was originally going for. LOL... :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/18/2019 8:08:00 AM

Oh, the happy days! Enjoyed the read, HT.

Hello There
Date: 10/18/2019 12:06:00 PM

hehehe LOL, Vijay. Happy, indeed ;) Thank you ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/17/2019 8:57:00 PM

Ok, Hello There. That is really going overboard to the brother!!! Very cool form you chose to use. You are good at blitzes!

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 10:01:00 PM

LOL. hehehe. It's all talk, my friend. I never chose violence for silly reasons, or ever really. This was supposed to be a one-line poem and a picture. That would have been a more accurate representation, though all of these thoughts would have come through loud and clear nonetheless...lol ;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/17/2019 8:29:00 PM

lol what a fun read, love your play on words...I think Bobby will enjoy this one my friend... hugs :)

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 9:55:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra ~ This was fun to write :) See reply below when you have a chance.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/17/2019 8:15:00 PM

You blitzed to perfection. Good luck in the contest.

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 9:52:00 PM

I was planning to write one line only, then as I was looking for a form to fit, I found the blitz, which I thought was eight lines, because the samples end after eight... I was happy with it until I realized I needed forty-eight and another two (and a few other things ;). In the end, this was such fun, and I'm happy with how it turned out :)

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 9:51:00 PM

Thank you, Richard! Funny the story behind choosing this form...

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/17/2019 7:41:00 PM

This was fun to read, like a quick wit battleground of wordplay. I like it.

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 8:11:00 PM

Thank you so much, Casarah. It was fun to write as well :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/17/2019 4:43:00 PM

For a minute there I thought I was seeing things, hallucinating because of this intense sugar rush from eating all of that candy I swi...oh wait. Wow, how creative was that and mean, just for swiping your Halloween candy. I'd hate see what you would do if he swiped your cell phone... : ) Really cool my friend. P.S. you can delete it. : )

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 5:39:00 PM

LOL. Nope, he was, basically, my training partner. I could never run ~ I was a pretty tough cookie ;)

Chris Green
Date: 10/17/2019 5:02:00 PM

That's a big dude, I would have just handed him the candy and ran like hell. : )

Hello There
Date: 10/17/2019 4:50:00 PM

hahaha ROFL ;) I erased my last response already, but you have me laughing again. Remember all those mouths to feed? Food was the only thing worth fighting over, etc? Oh, most importantly! This would have been directed towards one brother in particular 6'5", 220lbs as a teen ~ words were an important first line of defense ;) Or offense, I should say, since the 'blitz' is an offensive move ;)