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Breathe For Me

Breathe for me when I can’t perceive this hope before my eyes I’m stuck inside wrapped in shadows but never realized Darkness lies on the inside and everywhere, it’s true but truth remains within each breath I swear I’ll breathe for you

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Heidi Sands

Date: 9/29/2019 12:03:00 AM

I love this poem! I can feel it and understand it too. :)

Hello There
Date: 9/29/2019 12:25:00 AM

I am so pleased to know this. Thank you, Heidi :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/18/2019 3:45:00 PM

So beautiful...

Hello There
Date: 9/18/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thank you ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/16/2019 9:37:00 PM

This is some deep breathing! ~ Gershon

Hello There
Date: 9/16/2019 10:38:00 PM

Tell me about it! lol ;) Thank you for stopping by, Gershon :)

Pat Adams

Date: 9/14/2019 8:09:00 PM

This kind of makes me a little anxious for some reason. A FAV for me. Really very well done!!.......pat

Hello There
Date: 9/14/2019 9:55:00 PM

No worries, mate. All is good ~ Sometimes, though, it's good to know someone's got your back, especially when you think you have no one or anyone who really cares.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/14/2019 9:09:00 AM

Yes, sometimes we need help breathing. Perhaps if you have been fortunate this all led to some heavy breathing or at least some mouth to mouth rececitation.

Hello There
Date: 9/14/2019 1:17:00 PM

Lol. This was something a little different ;)

John Hamilton

Date: 9/13/2019 6:23:00 PM

Very nice...enjoyed!

Hello There
Date: 9/14/2019 12:18:00 AM

Thank you, John :)

Eric Ashford

Date: 9/13/2019 7:18:00 AM

Nice, neat poem, with a strong theme.

Hello There
Date: 9/13/2019 11:18:00 AM

Thank you, Eric ~

Chris Green

Date: 9/13/2019 7:17:00 AM

Such a deeply beautiful and longing poem that breathes of the pain some feel inside but also adds a breath of hope at the end. I really loved this. It felt very good to read this morning.

Hello There
Date: 9/13/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thank you so very much. I am very happy to know you understood and appreciated this.