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https://www.poetrysoup.com/images/bio_images/177736/photos/ps_bone_in_her_back-8309.jpg Sketch of Bone in her Back... hold link address and select open from drop menu Reading "Into the Wilderness " by Sara Donati Historical fiction based on true history. Please forgive any mistakes I've made in languages. My grandmother on my father's side was of the Cherokee people and I am proud to be descended from such a beautifully rich people. (Another Example for my poetry contest, Historical poetry) For the Colonization poetry contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann.
Oh, how we are poisoned! The Yonega, the Wasichu, a new creature, different from us in more than just their white skin and sunflower hair. How did such a people come across the great waters? They come to our people with gifts of death. Their ulcers wrapped in calico cloth. Their fevers traded to us for our good food. Oh, they do share these devils, equally, with all the tribes on mother earth. Baskets of evil spirits in jars of glass and crockery made by hands not their own. Pouring toxins, shame and sloth, into our proud warriors. Our people are blinded by their shiny metals and made deaf to the ancient beat of our ancestors drums. We weave their stories into the braids of our youth who forget the stories of our people. Oseronni eyes of blue and green cannot see the wind that moves the land, shaping it and making the soil sing. Sunlight steals their sight. Mother Earth and Father Sky, and Brother River nourishes the Three Sisters who sustain us with their corn, squash, and beans. They are offended and leave us to our folly. The white man teaches us dishonesty and sloth, making of our backs the bow that draws the arrows that break our hearts. The bone in our back bends our faces to mother earth. The only color left to us is the crimson in each salty tear that falls. Oh, how we are poisoned!
~Bone in her back, as named by the Cherokee, her mother's people. Sometimes called Elizabeth Thomas by her father's people. Written by her hand on this day, January 28, 1812, New Orleans, Louisiana (Fiction)

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Date: 2/16/2025 2:14:00 PM
This should have placed in the top three IMHO. Nice effort Crystol
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/17/2025 1:31:00 AM
Thank you... it turned out to be one of my favorites and one I'm proud of so it's OK with me! I'm glad for the inspiration garnered from the contest. There's amazing poetry in this contest! The ones I've read definitely deserve their places in the winners circle. Thanks for the encouragement Tom!! Xoxo
Date: 2/2/2025 5:08:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/9/2025 8:45:00 AM
Thanks Kim! Xo
Date: 1/31/2025 12:11:00 PM
Dear Crystol, I had to come back and honor you with your truly marvelous POTD. Congratulations!! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:32:00 PM
So sweet ty!xo
Date: 1/31/2025 3:54:00 AM
What a wonderful potd full of rich historical awesomeness! So sorry I am late with congratulations! I was so busy yesterday and the contest I’m hosting has me avoiding reading too many new poems for fear of seeing an entry by mistake with the poet name.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:32:00 PM
I'm so honored ty! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 11:57:00 PM
Superb, relevant write, warmest congratulations on POTD, Crystal
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:32:00 PM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 11:38:00 PM
Wonderful storytelling. God bless you always and Congrats on POTD. love, Gina
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:33:00 PM
Ty Gina, God bless! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 9:05:00 PM
Brilliantly penned, Crystol. And a great read. Congratulations on your POTD win.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:33:00 PM
I'm grateful! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 3:30:00 PM
Wow!!!! Just wow!!! Congrats on POTD. I’ve reread your poem many times. It’s amazing.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:34:00 PM
I really appreciate that! What a boost! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 11:49:00 AM
Dear Crystol, these words touch my heart. ' Mother Earth and Father Sky, and Brother River. ' Reminds me of a dear friend who is no longer here anymore. (Anthony Whitehorse). A part of the Lakota Sioux. I met his father David through poetry and that's how I became friends with his son. I miss them both and the stories they would tell. So many emotions tangle within, my dear friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:34:00 PM
Bless your kind heart... thank you for sharing! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 11:21:00 AM
No surprise here! Congrats!!! Sincerely a Crystol Woods fan!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:35:00 PM
That's so cool... I'm also a fan of yours Ben! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 10:34:00 AM
The sad truth. The Europeans brought much blite upon. The First-Nation people demonstrated respect and their love for Mother Earth. This reminds me so much of "A Thing Of Beauty" my niece is the one with the big brown eyes on the cover. Cree Winny Winterfall has her coming of age ceremony, with a speech of Earth Mother. Oshkikishika meaning A new day will dawn. Congratulations on a sobering heartfelt, and part of history POTD Crystol!! and your historic portrayal!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:35:00 PM
I'm honored and so grateful for all the kind feedback! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 10:26:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:31:00 PM
Ty Kim! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! What a wonderful/powerful ~ write/story. Have a blessed day writing away with your win.............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:59:00 AM
Your the best Paula, thanks!! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 7:14:00 AM
Powerful story, Congrats on POTD
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:58:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 6:06:00 AM
A powerful, heart rendering poem, a poem of truth. Congratulations on POTD Crystol. I do hope everyone reads this. xomo
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:58:00 AM
Oh tysm Maureen! I'm honored! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 6:04:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on Poem of the Day. Way to go, Crystol!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:58:00 AM
Thanks again!! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 5:45:00 AM
Ooh nice POTD choice. Even though these are allegedly chosen randomly through some mysterious algorithm, it's still nice to see a worthy piece get featured.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:57:00 AM
That's so sweet thank you! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 4:38:00 AM
Dear Crystol, When I read this I thought how your words are pure fire because it is so raw, unyielding, and hauntingly alive. It certainly cuts deep, carrying truth and sorrow with a voice that can’t be ignored. What a powerful way to honor and remember your roots. Congrats on POTD! Crystol your talent is undeniable, and your heart shines through every line. A FAV! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:57:00 AM
You honor me my friend... thank you so much! I'm saving your words to read on rainy days! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 4:37:00 AM
the beauty of this poetry belies the pain it unveils. A distant whisper coercing the reader to ponder the forever insanity of mankind.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:56:00 AM
Nice... expand on that in a poem please... I'll read that! Ty for your kindness! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 3:53:00 AM
Rich tribute dear poet.'We weave their stories into the braids of our youth' I love this thought. beautiful. Congratulations on POTD dear, Happy writing.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:55:00 AM
I'm grateful for your attention and comments! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 3:51:00 AM
Wow! Amazing write, Crystol. Congratulations on POTD!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:54:00 AM
Tysm! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 1:43:00 AM
Dear Crystol your poem is beautifully reconnecting you to your roots a reminder of the strength, wisdom, and resilience that flows from your lineage. The imagery of the bone in the back carry a deep sense of sadness of injustice done , making it not just words on a page but a sad heartbeat of your people. Congratulations on your awesome POTD ...Hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:53:00 AM
Ty Maria, the book series that also inspired this poem has weighed heavy on my heart. It's so satisfying to write something to honor my heritage. Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 1:19:00 AM
A well deserved poem of the day award Crystol, well done… Beryl
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:51:00 AM
Appreciate that! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 1:12:00 AM
- Powerful poem, Crystol - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/31/2025 6:47:00 AM
Thank you! Xo
Date: 1/30/2025 12:52:00 AM
Quite a powerful verse Crystol, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Crystol Woods
Date: 1/30/2025 7:39:00 AM
Wow tysm! Xo
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