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Bloodstained

"A rose thorn pricked my finger as I laid it on the grave. Tears mingled with blood, staining my love's headstone." ~ quote by poet
I often write of tragedies and woes that darken life Those tenebrous times that cause sorrow and strife They bring heartache and grief of their own accord I brandish them with words as if my pen is a sword Ink spots drip with my tears upon parchment pages Bloodstained splotches I pay to life as costly wages My sonnets should tell of love and sweet romance but no one dear to me is left to hold in a dance I often wake in the night from dreams of the past in the hour of gloaming when shadows are cast and feel I'm drowning in a river, caught in a flood where the current flows red, stained from blood I've felt life leaving my body when I wanted to die On bloodstained sheets, my soul prepared to fly From emotional wounds I bled, and I blame villainy, the cruel fate that took my loved ones so dismally. January 30, 2023 Writing Challenge - B Word Contest Sponsored by Constance la France

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Date: 2/4/2023 7:49:00 AM
Lin, deep and beautifully penned, love the quote, and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge B Words, well done, Constance
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/4/2023 8:02:00 AM
Always honored to read your comments on my poetry, Constance. Merci for my placement in your contest.
Date: 2/2/2023 12:31:00 PM
An excellent sonnet Lin although it’s sad. Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/4/2023 8:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Date: 2/1/2023 1:55:00 PM
Way to go with this winner. Great Congratulations for you. Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2023 2:30:00 PM
Thanks, Sara.
Date: 2/1/2023 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/story/quote. Love It. Have a blessed day..........
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2023 2:29:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Paula.
Date: 2/1/2023 2:32:00 AM
I agree with Jo; dark and moving, congratulations
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2023 2:29:00 PM
Thanks, Terry.
Date: 1/31/2023 5:10:00 AM
Dark and moving, Lin:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/1/2023 2:28:00 PM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 1/30/2023 1:32:00 PM
Quite a dark verse Lin, Poe like even. Good luck in the contest, hope you're having a good day. Tom
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/30/2023 2:22:00 PM
My days have been wonderfully full lately, Tom. I’ve had news of a granddaughter to arrive in July. I love Poeish poetry, so thank you.

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