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Blessings From a Setback

planning a fresh start inky fog delays train ride… life’s choices on hold while metro lamps fade …a shadow appears on the lane with roses waving he pleads atonement beneath moonlit confessions… tears kissing my fears along gleam of night ....prayers melt our love’s setback train’s jammed ride… fate’s gift 7/10/2016 Setback Contest For Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 7/13/2016 5:47:00 PM
Congrats Nette, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/12/2016 11:37:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your nice win. Skat
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Date: 7/11/2016 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your impressive 9th place win in the Setbacks contest! Jesse
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Date: 7/11/2016 1:32:00 PM
So much woven in such few words, Nette! Congrats!
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Date: 7/11/2016 1:03:00 PM
Nette,this is saying so much in so less!Congratulations!
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:11:00 AM
Nette, what a beautiful set of senryu lady...true insight with this one...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 7/11/2016 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations Nette on the placement of the Setbacks contest.
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:13:00 PM
Life's choice on hold, a good time to write poetry nette, that'll make the fog go away, just like my blues...
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Date: 7/10/2016 5:02:00 PM
very nice, Nette. a wonderful ending!!
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Date: 7/10/2016 3:10:00 PM
Making up is the best part of any argument. Good thing the fog set in. As elegant as it should be, nette.
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Date: 7/10/2016 3:04:00 PM
No drawback can win from destiny. Excellent poem that glows!
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:15:00 PM
- A romantic ride, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:07:00 PM
Heavenly poem radiating with a gratifying end! Graded as A+ senryu.
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Date: 7/10/2016 11:30:00 AM
I love romantic train poems! Ha - this is my first one, but I did love the love and the situation. Sooooooo good ... CayCay
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Date: 7/10/2016 11:18:00 AM
Nette, great Senryus a 7 and good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 7/10/2016 10:44:00 AM
Well penned senryu nette...I hope it has not set you back lol...god bless and good luck in contest... a winner to me...^WW^
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Date: 7/10/2016 10:36:00 AM
Wonderful Senryu nette...This will soar in the contest
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