Bite Sized

Bad juju - I don't get it at graves Nor in haunted houses where it's craved Sometimes I get it in conversation From a glance, oh the degradation! Feel the love from where ancestors tread I give the living a chance, til I'm home with the dead

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David Kavanagh

Date: 4/9/2024 3:59:00 PM

A very nice bite size Dilly, first time I’ve seen (bad juju) used in a poem, it would also be great to use as a chant in a heavy metal song, I digress; yes we get bad juju mostly from the living, sometimes it’s best to go with our gut, who needs the grief they offer, bye bye, I don’t need it, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/9/2024 11:28:00 PM

One benefit of getting older is recognising taking yourself out of the wrong crowd of people can often be the only change required. Thanks for the comment, appreciated

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/9/2024 7:32:00 AM

A funny and yet artistically written rhyme. Indeed, I hear the ring of truth.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/9/2024 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Hilda, I might do something more with 'bad juju' - took me ages to remember the expression haha :)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2024 3:15:00 AM

good one Dilly I especially loved 'Sometimes I get it in conversation From a glance, oh the degradation!' bad vibes are something we can all relate to I guess! hugs jan xx

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/9/2024 10:03:00 AM

Thanks Jan, this was a spill over bit of poetry from my religious one really. Although I'm away at the moment seeing lots of historical things where bad things occurred and get a worst vibe if I'm stood in someone's way :)