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Between Sleep and Giddyup

half past five - coffee between sleep and giddyup eight - another cup sleep til nine - next day set not the alarm, morrow jumping beans - must catch up nah, forget extra need to catch up - exercise stretch, bend, reach for sun away with caffeine surely a nap is in store but not on the road put the grinds away the moon dictates - stay in bag pour me into bed early hour - coffee attack that bag with fervor sip and sip and write And pondering the potential subject coffee ignores politics and turns to family between light and dark cream or black, the sip of life Christ at the center

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/2/2024 2:10:00 AM

Great, you put Christ at the centre. Avoid caffeine; not good for your health. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2024 5:47:00 AM

Christ always at the center! Yes, need to limit caffeine. Usually a cup in the morning. :)

David Crandall

Date: 9/1/2024 11:26:00 AM

The short, quick phrases go well with the coffee

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2024 5:53:00 AM

Thank you, David! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2024 5:48:00 AM

Thank you, David! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/31/2024 8:07:00 PM

'the sip of life' - I like that phrase. And 'the sip' is vital, I think. To sip coffee, not to gulp it, is helpful, at least for me. If I pour myself two cups a day, I actually down less than 1/2 that amount, because I just sip it... And one can only sip for so long... They called Wilt Chamberlin 'The Big Dipper.' I'm the 'Little Sipper.' :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2024 6:21:00 AM

LOL…so funny, Gershon!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/31/2024 4:09:00 PM

Your busy life has true belief as seen in your poem. Thank you for sharing this light.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2024 7:20:00 PM

Thank you, Hilda! :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/31/2024 2:06:00 PM

Keen on caffeine to give you that jolt, I like a nice cup in the morning

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2024 7:20:00 PM

It is a nice way to start the day :) Have a great evening, Joe!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/31/2024 9:43:00 AM

I am drinking coffee right now, lol! Loved this interesting piece, dear Kim. <3

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/31/2024 7:21:00 PM

Awesome! Thank you, Paige!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/30/2024 10:35:00 AM

You're an early riser like me Kim, first thing I have is coffee, gets my engines moving. Although retired I was always up at 04.00 the deadmans hour and can't break the habit. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2024 12:26:00 PM

I like rising early. Waste not the day! Hugs, sweet friend!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/30/2024 8:49:00 AM

What a fun coffee write. Now I am tired from reading this. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day with your coffee as you write way...................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2024 12:27:00 PM

Thanks, Paula! I always enjoy having you pop in! Hugs!