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"better Than Caffeine"

The blanket slides down the view in morning sun light your my coffee start.

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Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/23/2010 11:23:00 AM

Hello Michael, How beautiful this is. Such a wonderful way to awaken. Lucky Guy As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2010 3:42:00 PM

he he he! wow! Michale, i love this one,, very much, imagine that ,,love is better than caffeine! but, too bad for me that my love lives way over in Oregon,, so!,, Right now I have to drink caffeine,, until I'm over there with him. It must be nice to wake up to the smell of love instead of folders~ who? makes my wake up great..,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

John Freeman

Date: 11/22/2010 11:34:00 AM

Hard to imagine anything that would beat caffeine, Michael. Smile! But! I thin=k you exposed it. LOL Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/22/2010 5:14:00 AM

Well my White Knight ..your poetry is so much better than that horrible game last night... I had to finish following the score online.. my eyes could not take it any longer.. cannot believe the BOO BIRDS are on top of the NFC East.. this is a tragic day in the world of football to me.. hope your day is bright and cheery but being a true GIANTS fan.. I feel and share your pain today luv.. Jersey Girl in mourning ... luv..

James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2010 3:57:00 PM

Now that's what I call an awakening, simply stunning Senyru Michael >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2010 3:19:00 PM

oohh la la, yes, who needs coffee???

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/21/2010 2:54:00 PM

as long as they open by themselves i'm fine. john

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/21/2010 1:18:00 PM

This is a beautiful write. THanks for your kind comment. Jancarl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/21/2010 1:04:00 PM

OK .. I am so up for this one Michael.. a lovely picture u painted in early morning .. u have a beautiful muse to awaken u too..luv.. and u took the words out of Ron's mouth today luv.. all these great men thinking alike..scary ...and romantic.. JG. praying for our GIANTS tonight my White Knight...

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/21/2010 10:33:00 AM

wonderful senryu Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/21/2010 9:21:00 AM

this senryu has a stirring, playful pacing.. lovely, michael.. your visit to threads ia a delight.. thank you. warmest, nette

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/21/2010 8:25:00 AM

Nice romantic thoughts of the morning. Michael. Thanks for your comments on senses and I visited your Paper voices, you have conveyed it better than me,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2010 8:19:00 AM

Your lovely senryu evokes images of the electricity of passion, Michael. Indeed, seeing such a sight in the morning can be better than a caffeine boost! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/21/2010 7:52:00 AM

I betcha most guys would enjoy that kind of cuppa or that visuals to wake up to.. Enjoy your coffee and I will enjoy the magic you create.. Love Wilma

Verlecia Fields

Date: 11/21/2010 6:54:00 AM

Thank you for your comment on "Wallpapered, Soloed Nudity" Well! I do blush at the sight of this poem! And I make this statement, that with so little words. You have amazed me with a bigger smile, than the last we meet with words.Till next we read again , my Favored Poet!