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Behind the Vanishing Veil

Behind The Vanishing Veil Trapped in a saprophytic shell where dying demons dwell All you see is the better me behind the veil of the Judas tree A neuronic nomad sailing the seas of the sequestered sad. Dec.04.2016 Depression is...a short poem - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 12/4/2016 2:18:00 PM
wow ^WW^ you have painted incredibly deep images in just 3 lines - love the alliteration too:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/4/2016 2:05:00 PM
Great write! Love the alliterations. Good luck in the contest.
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