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Behind the Bedroom Door

breathers inbetweeners restricted, impassable threshold worn down worn out closed off knock knock i don’t have the heart to turn her away life’s knocked her down the hinges creak deep breath I’m open I’m mom

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Date: 9/20/2023 2:24:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Kim! Now, on to the next... <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2023 2:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, my sweet friend!
Date: 9/19/2023 1:17:00 AM
- Let her in...needs some cuddling :) - Sweet :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 4:41:00 AM
Yes! This describes one year that was intense. My only escape was a deep breath because my daughter needed me. :)
Date: 9/19/2023 1:11:00 AM
Could this be an invitation to some pet to come and keep you company at night? Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 4:42:00 AM
LOL…no, but I love that is what you saw!!! I love when a reader finds something new! Blessings!

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