Bee-Leaf

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Evelyn Judy Buehler.

golden bee humming lost in foliage jade green where are the flowers have you flown too far long miles from the honeycomb wherefore did you roam you will find your way back to the fields of colors beyond deep green woods

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/22/2021 5:25:00 PM

'Flown to far,' Should have driven a car... Enjoyed the adventures of this bee, Evelyn. ~ Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/22/2021 8:14:00 PM

He was out of gas. :0 Thank you very much. Evelyn

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/20/2021 11:25:00 AM

Beautiful! Loved the words fields of colour.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/20/2021 11:37:00 AM

Thank you for your appreciation. :D

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/20/2021 9:55:00 AM

Beautiful, Nothing is better than appreciating nature in its purest form, especially those humming bees. My grandson is only a year old, and the only word he can correctly spell is bees... bees, relating to the bee movie that he loves to watch. Kindest regards, my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/20/2021 11:45:00 AM

Thank you very much for your words of support. Your grandson is quite young for spelling. Maybe he'll be a writer, too. Television can be a great learning aid. Have an enjoyable day, Evelyn :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/19/2021 10:09:00 PM

Instinct is of paramount importance to any insect. They all know the way home. Lovely colorful poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/20/2021 11:52:00 AM

It would be nice if housefiies did, LOL! Thank you for the compliment. :)