Beauty Or the Beast

Marked for beauty or for grossness
Central chest area, just like my ancestors
Which ones I won't confess, yet...
I debate each year-- remove the beast?

Or let the beauty live as a heritage of my family
So there it resides evident centrally
A pebble in the road, that leads through the valley
Forgotten mostly, yet a point to greet on the journey

Wish they had left me a beach front condo instead
At least it is not in the center of my forehead!



For the Holy Mole-y contest!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 9/13/2010 7:17:00 AM
As someone who's still sprouting moles I completely identify with this piece. Some are flat against my skin some are risen, those are the ones I hate. I struggle with having them removed because I know where they come from just like you. Thanks for making me laugh about something I really never liked about myself. Monica
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Date: 8/24/2010 12:43:00 AM
lmao Loved it Doris the holey moley contest made me crack up love Jayne x x
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:03:00 PM
Haaaa! Good job Dorse. Hope you do well in the contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:26:00 AM
Better keep abreast of that mole. Good write. Luck in the contest. Dave
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Date: 8/9/2010 4:24:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this winners' circle write..Mom
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Date: 8/9/2010 7:44:00 AM
Very good Doris..good luck in Nikko's contest.. u really presented it well with your rhyme .. my entry u already read.. Mole-y Mayhem.. this is so fun to write these pieces.. happy week..with luv..
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:25:00 AM
haha, wow, what a great entry for nikko's contest. That last couplet sure took me by surprise ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:20:00 AM
haha, funny one Doris. Good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 8/8/2010 10:14:00 PM
I too would have prefered a condo Doris, loved your entry, best wishes for Nikko's contest ~ Wilma
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:07:00 PM
intersting poem this. good luck in contest. Harry
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Date: 8/8/2010 8:23:00 PM
a very delightful piece,,I wish you all the best in the contest,,I also want to Thank you for all your visits to mine and for the words that you left behind,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:36:00 PM
Leave it! It seems to me like it would be kinda like a third nipple!:)
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:08:00 PM
Amazing, Doris. I seem to have an "inherited" mole as well. I thought this was a coincidence, but maybe there's a genetic tie. Enjoyed the humor! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:06:00 PM
Your write left me laughing, nice piece...
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