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3. "Dead leaves lay still until the wind takes them here and there: even the last flower is withered: yet there is a beauty in decay. " Quote by _Constance La France Beyond decay, there is the memory of vibrant beauty hiding. The fragile petals of each delicate rose, forming a soft array. Colour and the most memorable fragrance is subsiding. There is the memory of vibrant beauty hiding, beyond decay. What once was ruby red, with leaves of emerald, green. The amazing beauty of each perfect flower, now quite dead. Now only dried petals drained of colour remain to be seen. With leaves of emerald, green, what once was ruby red. Lavish blooms, bursting with fresh alure once took the stage. Gone is the wafting scent, and the striking rose perfumes. Only to wither and turn humbly brown as they slowly age. Bursting with fresh alure once took the stage, lavish blooms. A breeze tossing the crisp leaves makes a rustling sound. This brittle stick and thorns once had beauty. It deceives. Then withered leaves and petals lay lifeless on the ground. Makes a rustling sound, a breeze tossing the crisp leaves. The withered pressed bouquet, it’s in a box on the shelf. From their wedding day, glorious red roses, now in decay. She smiles as she remembers its beauty and that of herself. It’s in a box on the shelf, the withered pressed bouquet. Sponsor Constance La France Contest Name Writing Challenge - D Quotes Swap Quatrain Quote # 3 6th June 2023

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Date: 6/19/2023 8:43:00 AM
Beautifully written! The softness, elegance, and imagery of your words here are absolutely masterful. Well done, SV.
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Date: 6/19/2023 9:14:00 AM
Such lovely praise Shane, thank you so much for your generous comment, it is appreciated.
Date: 6/18/2023 6:40:00 AM
Dear SV, you have once again bestowed upon us a magnificent poem. Coincidentally, we have both chosen the same quote for the contest. The fervor with which you present your arguments shines. Upon examining the grand tapestry of human progress, it becomes evident that significant advancements often emerge following great conflicts. Therefore, the concept of decay may paradoxically be regarded as a novel avenue for enhancing our life within the vast theater of this world. Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/19/2023 9:11:00 AM
I most graciously welcome your words on the subject of this poem SP. Whether it is a memory that is sparked or actual beauty seen in something that is less than its former self, it is definitely in the eye of the beholder. Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment
Date: 6/12/2023 6:34:00 AM
SV, beautifully penned, and thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations on your win. And thank you for using my quote as your inspiration !
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Date: 6/12/2023 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for supplying such a beautiful quote. It definitely inspired an overwhelming feeling on which to delve into thoughts of magestic beauty behind that which had decayed. Thank you also for honoring me with a place in your contest.
Date: 6/8/2023 2:50:00 PM
Wow - great quatrain! Excellent job my friend!
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Date: 6/9/2023 1:14:00 AM
Just got home from a couple of days in hospital to find all your lovey comments Linda, how lovely of you !
Date: 6/6/2023 1:02:00 AM
Your poem speaks volumes. All vegetation may decay, but as the seasons change, we find beauty again.
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Date: 6/6/2023 1:20:00 AM
Sometimes dear Victor, memories of what was, are sweeter than reality.

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