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Be Merciful-.Be

From the beginning to the end tithe. Round the circle of eternity, she writhes. Fresh, full, ripe, and undeniably free. O God, be merciful to she. Fill the receptacle with riches untold. Harvest the bounty of beauty unfold. Lust not for love is a more precious fee. O God, be merciful to she. Trust in companionships hearty store Let loose the randy and rabid bore. Feast on the comfort of kindnesses decree. O God, be merciful to she.

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Date: 12/29/2019 4:53:00 PM
Elegantly written and empowering, well done!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/30/2019 3:38:00 PM
Thank you so much Charlotte
Date: 7/29/2011 4:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Lee
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Date: 7/29/2011 4:20:00 PM
Hey Debbie, Another beautiful poem worthy of 1st place. Tahnks for the comment, I didnt think it would be listed.
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Date: 7/29/2011 9:10:00 AM
Beautiful, Deb. Many congrats on your SUPER FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/29/2011 8:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in John's contest. Really enjoyed reading your poem in this one. Thanks for sharing your most excellent poetry. Love Glenna
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Date: 7/28/2011 4:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 7/28/2011 3:47:00 PM
Very nice...congrats on your win.Enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 7/28/2011 10:47:00 AM
Congrats on your great win, cheers..SJ
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Date: 7/27/2011 6:22:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your first place win.. wonderful words to think on luv..
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Date: 7/27/2011 2:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:32:00 PM
hey Debbie, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 7/27/2011 12:24:00 PM
sublime and a real topper, debs...fireworks of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:54:00 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, debbie
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:31:00 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations
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Date: 7/27/2011 11:29:00 AM
Debbie, The sponsor receives the grace. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/17/2009 5:37:00 AM
O God, be merciful to me too! Every word in this one fits together perfectly...beautiful flow! Tim
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Date: 9/15/2009 1:19:00 AM
Lovely first stanza...Raul
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Date: 9/14/2009 11:59:00 PM
Lovely prayer Debbie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 9/14/2009 1:00:00 PM
Love the title and how it's not quite the refrain yet carries something else in the extra 'Be' statement after Be Merciful. This one feels different, almost structured. Love the taste imagery in fresh, full, ripe, and also feasting on comfort. reading this I see a woman eating a peach, then streaming her thoughts on a keyboard about how amazing the peach tastes:) make of that what you will wise one..L&L -Yoni
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Date: 9/13/2009 5:58:00 PM
This is such a lovely form, Debbie, but your words make it beautiful. BIG HUG! Love, Your wayward friend who is glad to be home!
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Date: 9/13/2009 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry today Deborah. I have enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2009 5:40:00 AM
beautiful anthem! Deb!
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Date: 9/12/2009 2:33:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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