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Battered Not Flattered

Our relationship is oh so sad Whatever I do, she gets real mad She'll start screaming on high Then she'll blacken my eye And all of you think you've got it bad

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/29/2024 7:59:00 PM
It could be much worse I suppose - For she could well flatten your nose - She could split your lips - And then call it bliss - When she’s tied your head to your toes…….. Beryl
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/2/2024 5:06:00 PM
Ouch!
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Randy Freie
Date: 4/30/2024 12:20:00 AM
Hi Beryl, or she could hate my guts and kick me in the schnutz. Oh the pain! Thanks for the feedback.

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