Bait

everything's always been the same your pretty face, your puny brain all along, 'was waiting in vain now tell me, dear, your claim to fame you say we both need breathing space and you say that right in my face you say all things will be in place i'm glad that you can paraphrase you ask me what i was thinking been through this kind of questioning and somehow i've seen this coming then suddenly, there was nothing tic toc, tic toc, it's half past eight i'm not the biggest fan of fate speak now because i'm running late this love ****, a wonderful bait

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Vintage Sparrow

Date: 3/8/2015 4:21:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this most of all because it flows. I have a great weakness for poetry more so when it flows and the words begin to sound like music in the soul. Thank you for sharing.

Jesus De Castro
Date: 3/8/2015 11:03:00 PM

Thanks for reading my work. :)