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Autumn Irks Waltzing Sunlight

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Mists show vaporous idiosyncrasies emotionless crying over the essence of the dull sky, same as a gentle walking unsophisticated steed embrace a forceful nature, delicate yet totally vulnerable With the onset of twilight the impiety appeared to be oddly astounding, there was no witless snarl and it's a smooth tone, predawn conceals quell the loco share of color moods, Starlings rewind their impeccable wings, early mooring paths for a sailboat through wildly shifting flights, a measurement for rating sight for slowed down dreamers When it got dull fall into the stream In a swarm of happy tones, utterance grows softer and deeper Grin impersonates amazing harmony marks the epilog of a tranquil day the gleam of the evening, woven into an unending blanket Inward supplications go to close justifications as the embedded kiss creates everlasting recognition, apex moans calmed the room for a couple of moments, underneath a shelter of trapped gems Written: September 16, 2022 BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 9/23/2022 9:17:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your great win, dear friend !
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Date: 9/22/2022 6:45:00 PM
Lasaad, a huge CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive piece, expressive use of personification! Janice
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Date: 9/22/2022 2:51:00 PM
Back with congratulations for this fine work that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 9/22/2022 12:04:00 PM
Dear Lasaad, I relish the grandeur of your beautiful Autumn imagery. Under the influence of your gifted poetic pen, the "waltzing sunlight" leaves us feeling gratified and deeply satisfied in the bask of a lush and luscious daydream between the twilight hours. Simply splendid, rich and striking poetry! Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/22/2022 10:24:00 AM
Simply amazing Lasaad! Your words weave an autumn morning spell with luxurious images to revel in as we sit and watch the sunrise with you. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you my friend.
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Date: 9/17/2022 8:43:00 AM
Such outstanding and telling images of pre dawn. Stunning write.....! Wish you all the best in the contest, dear friend.
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Date: 9/16/2022 4:02:00 PM
Beautiful images of autumn my friend. Well written in exquisite vocabulary. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 9/16/2022 2:46:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest to me. Way to go. A very shaped zig zag kind of poem. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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