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Ascending Belonging

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Ascending within; to feel my happiness climB Setting out solo; internal ecstasy can providE Carving contentment by relearning to crawL Enjoying this wonderful spiritual crescendO Noticing on the way; all little things contaiN Dualities in me but don't require explaininG Intrinsic kaleidoscopes; always up the antI Needless is it to enforce emotional refraiN Grasp the view feeling truest in belonginG

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Arastu Goyal

Date: 11/18/2023 12:10:00 AM

Nice work, congrats on POTD!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/18/2023 12:48:00 AM

Thank you kindly! A.S.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/17/2023 8:04:00 PM

absolutely lovely -

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 8:07:00 PM

Regards! A.S.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/17/2023 7:25:00 PM

Internal happiness ! Such a wonderful feeling within, indeed. This is beautiful, uplifting and spiritual, all at the same time. Your thoughts curl softly around me and my heart. Congratulations AS, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 7:33:00 PM

Brandy you are an actual soul personified for all who know you to see. It is I who should be honored, to even say that you're someone I could consider a friend! A.S.

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/17/2023 7:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD, not easy to write a double acrostic. Enjoy your honor

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 7:30:00 PM

Sotto, when I think of looking up a friend in the dictionary I automatically think of you. You're the first person, to ever point out a genuine critique of my work to make me better. To get me to see that there is more for me to what I write. I am not educated in English or poetic form what I write comes deep from within. You got me to see that it matters how it's presented. For that my friend, I am eternally grateful! A.S.

Daniel Turner

Date: 11/17/2023 6:01:00 PM

Congratulations, AS for POTD honors from this very inspirational poem. A double acrostic is a feat in itself.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 6:30:00 PM

Daniel my friend, if you had any idea how much I value the critiques and the honesty you've given me.... I appreciate you man! A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 11/17/2023 4:49:00 PM

Awww that's so sweet! Love the clich'e :) I am a Paige that will always be inspired by you <3 Hugs tight* just me!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 5:18:00 PM

Paige Hind

Date: 11/17/2023 3:54:00 PM

OMG!!! Congrats, my sweet and gifted friend! You deserve this; your work is so worthy of this. I am honored just seeing you featured! Love always, just me! <3

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 4:13:00 PM

;) you are like a rock, you're like a pillar, you're more than a friend, you're there when I need a voice to tell me what I'm saying is okay, but you're more than that you're a Paige of my life's history that I would read every single day! A.S.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/17/2023 2:12:00 PM

Searching within ones self is a truly rewarding journey..Ascending within; to feel my happiness climB Setting out solo; internal ecstasy can providE. Love this poem. The presentation enhances an already wonderful verse. Absolutely worthy of your POTD. Congrats

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 4:10:00 PM

S.V., you're definitely going to get a visit from me Thank you very much for your kind words and congratulatory remarks! A.S.

Deb M

Date: 11/17/2023 12:44:00 PM

Congratulations AS on POTD ….a very clever write! Debx

Deb M
Date: 11/19/2023 4:41:00 AM

You are very sweet AS! Debx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 4:09:00 PM

Deb you and I have shared some excellent moments and conversation. Thank you very much for the congratulatory words and for being another fine Deborah within my life! A.S.

I Am Anaya

Date: 11/17/2023 12:28:00 PM

Our journey of enlightenment isn't required or forced, but if we want to ascend, spiritual guides us along the way. I hiked many mountain trails and canyons, meditation along the way, healing. Great voice on audio, wow! Creative double acrostic. Congratulations on your POTD A.S.! Enjoy -Anaya

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 4:07:00 PM

Hello Anaya, by the way I am a real boy LOL ;). You have been such a sweet friend and confidant. I'm glad you enjoyed hearing the audio. Something I should have started doing a long time ago and in part I did start doing because of you. Appreciate your journey up and down those mountains, it absolutely matters! A.S.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/17/2023 11:02:00 AM

A marvelous double acrostic, Antonio! So difficult to accomplish. Mesmerizing images. Truly a soulful "solo" journey into your life's pilgrimage of "intrinsic kaleidoscopes" and healing. Congratulations on your POTD! Blessings on your journey!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 4:05:00 PM

Sam thank you very much! Truly appreciate you enjoying it and seeing it the way YOU do! A.S.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 11/17/2023 10:54:00 AM

An outstanding write Antiono, with you on the audio. This will be my FAVE of FAVEs.. I read the comments below. Thank you. Especially for your communications. If poetry is not about the truth within us, ……and this includes the truth about the world ….it is totally meaningless. Truth is like a fine wine ,,,which inspires the soul. Anything less than that, is totally meaningless! Pangie xxx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 4:04:00 PM

Pangie, I was going to write some witty little poem to you. But I'm just going to speak truth you're unwavering dedication to being genuine is beyond inspiring! You are the type of person that the world needs to hear from on the regular. You will never be someone click through for me sweet friend! Much love A.S. / P.S. you were right I did need to look up heroine in a dictionary LOL

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/17/2023 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful double Acrostic write. I have not done one of these in a long time. Have a great/blessed day with your win.................

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 4:01:00 PM

Hey Paula, my day was blessed the first time you blessed my day! You are an incredible voice. A.S.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/17/2023 9:18:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your POTD A.S. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:59:00 PM

Bill you are a steadfast friend! And an inspiration the way you see the world is very similar to how I do. Thank you so much for being who you are. From your North Star brother to my Lone Star brother! A.S

Karen Jones

Date: 11/17/2023 8:24:00 AM

Cool acrostic. Congrats on potd!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:57:00 PM

Thank you Karen, it is an honor to have read your works. And to have been able to share camaraderie with you! A.S.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/17/2023 7:16:00 AM

Great Acrostic on both sides. Congratulations on POTD

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:56:00 PM

Eve, to say you're an inspirational woman, would not even begin to describe how much I care about you! Warmly A.S.

Tom Woody

Date: 11/17/2023 6:19:00 AM

Nice acrostic on self healing and awareness. Congrats on potd

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:55:00 PM

Thank you Tom! Mad respect for you sir! A.S.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 11/17/2023 5:16:00 AM

Belonging in POTD honours for sure! Brilliant piece dear Scorpio. One magnificent big little thing this poem is, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the day! xomo

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:54:00 PM

And then there was MO, You Beautiful human being you've been more of an inspiration to me over the last year then you could possibly ever know! Your kindness your warm heart you're genuine glowing Humanity! Much love for you forever friend! A.S.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 11/17/2023 4:08:00 AM

Congratulations on this very challenging form of poetry. I am in awe of the talent on poetry soup. This acrostic is well crafted with such a lovely spiritual message. I hope you enjoy this well deserved recognition for your POTD.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:48:00 PM

Nancy I wholeheartedly concur, the gifted poets and poetess that we have the privilege of sharing this media with are truly some of the highest class of humanity! Thank you very much for your kind words to me. Fondly A.S.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/17/2023 3:44:00 AM

A.S., a great poem and very creative, congratulations on POTD!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:47:00 PM

Tania, thank you very much for your kindness and thoughts! Warmest regards A.S.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/17/2023 3:09:00 AM

Great acrostic and message, A.S. Congratulations on POTD!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:46:00 PM

Thank you Charlie! Truly appreciate your kind words sir. A.S.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/17/2023 2:46:00 AM

what a wonderful message in an excellent double acrostic, i've attempted to do double acrostic in the past and know what a challenge it is! many congrats on a very well deserved POTD:-) hugs Jan xx

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:45:00 PM

Hello Jan salutations, thank you for your well wishes and congratulatory remarks! If you have perhaps posted that poem and would give me the kindness of letting me know it's title I would love to read it. Respectfully A.S.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2023 1:32:00 AM

- Creative at both ends... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. with a great message A.S. :) - hugs

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:38:00 PM

Anna-lise, I appreciate you so much my dear! You're an inspiring person. Thank you very much for seeing the message and enjoying it! Warm regards A.S.

Christina Bowring

Date: 11/17/2023 1:13:00 AM

Many congratulations on POTD with this very artistic, thoughtful poem. Love all the lines especially the first one. It’s very clever how you have created this acrostic spelling out both lines of the title and I love the spiritual ascend to contentment and belonging. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing and enjoy your celebratory day. Blessings to you :):)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:43:00 PM

Thank you very kindly Christina, introspection has always been a pillar of my poems. I'm glad you could see it and find it in the writing! Warmly A.S.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 11/17/2023 1:05:00 AM

Great spiritual message, enjoyed! Beautifully crafted too, it’s not easy doing a mirrored Acrostic whilst sticking with the theme. Warmest congratulations on POTD, Scorpio

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 11/17/2023 3:35:00 PM

Thank you very kindly Seeker, it has been far too long since I've visited your work. I will endeavor to make some time to pay you a visit in the near future. Cordially A.S.