As Long as I See the Sky

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11/5/2024 for As long as I see the sky Poetry Contest sponsored by Jcb Brul

as long as I see the sky, let my spirit fly, 'fore I hit the dirt

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:28:00 AM

Yours is an amusing one. Well done.

David Crandall
Date: 12/1/2024 3:58:00 PM

Haha. I think I'm arcing across the sky right now, but my trajectory is going toward the dirt.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:34:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, David :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 11/29/2024 10:49:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/28/2024 6:18:00 PM

congratulations dear poet. 'let my spirit fly' lovely. cheers.

David Crandall
Date: 11/29/2024 10:49:00 AM

Thanks Thriveni! hmm, as I think about it, I feel that phrase comes from some song I can't place... oh, I know, "let your soul and spirit fly into the mystic" by Van Morrison (into the mystic)