Another Place

daydreams self-contained escapism crawled and creeped daunting nervousness

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Robert Pettit

Date: 4/2/2021 10:26:00 AM

You seem to do well with these senryu entries. This is another great one that I have read.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/1/2019 12:32:00 PM

Hello Franci Hoffman, I often day dream of being in anther place. Somewhere by the water. Have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2020 6:02:00 PM

Hello Francis Hoffman,Oh I hope that you enjoyed your little get away. You are welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Franci Hoffman
Date: 11/2/2019 5:01:00 PM

Thank you, Darlene. We just got back from another place but we were in the mountains! It was lovely but it is good to be home. Thank you for your comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2019 3:46:00 PM

sounds kind of twilight zonish!!! Just let the dreams explode!!!

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 8/12/2019 10:01:00 AM

Diving into an imaginative world is the best thing that can happen sometimes. Enjoyed reading this :)

Franci Hoffman
Date: 8/12/2019 10:31:00 AM

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)