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For the Animating Innate Vibrance Poetry Contest of Unseeking Seeker

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Line of inquiry: "betwixt the pulse of our heartbeat simply present, head-heart linking dwelling in time stretched blissful peace awareness became unblinking" Unseeking Seeker Oh, those times when it was just you and I. Forever in your arms I’d want to stay. I gazed into your eyes – in blue of sky I felt immersed as all cares slipped away. There was no past or future; we were one, and one together, we were breathing bliss as warm and comforting as springtime’s sun, which on each rose’s petals leaves a kiss. There was no time, and only peace we knew. It stretched before us. Utterly aware were we , that love - unspoken - is love true. Accepting one another, souls laid bare, I lost myself in you and you in me. Unblinking bliss– we were so wholly free.

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Date: 11/17/2024 6:32:00 PM
Dear Andrea, your romantic imagery is rich and intimate. "Accepting one another, souls laid bare,/I lost myself in you and you in me." -as it should be. Beautiful! Congratulations for your success in Seeker's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/14/2024 12:27:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win with this poem so full of romance and promise. It is a beautiful example of love coming alive - being animated! So happy to see this on the winners list! Blessings of autumn joy to you.
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Date: 11/8/2024 5:40:00 PM
This romantic piece is a little haunting....but in a cosmic way...enjoyed reading <3
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Date: 11/5/2024 7:01:00 PM
A lovely romantic Sonnet Andrea, to love and be loved in return, is the best feeling in the world… Beryl
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Date: 11/5/2024 10:29:00 AM
That was Beautiful Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/5/2024 3:54:00 PM
Thanks, John
Date: 11/5/2024 10:16:00 AM
Immersive imagery, found the passionate phrasing and its distinctive. Nice write.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/5/2024 3:54:00 PM
Thanks so much and for commenting on my poems today
Date: 11/5/2024 6:45:00 AM
Very nice, love captured so well.
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Date: 11/5/2024 5:56:00 AM
Just beautiful. Words are sometimes cheap, but your words are the dearest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/5/2024 3:54:00 PM
Thanks. So sweet of you to say
Date: 11/2/2024 8:27:00 PM
This put me in a state of love Andrea. Your words were so beautifully picked for this loving and moving piece. " I gaze into your eye" part, did you mean I gaze into your eyes? Anyway it was in my humble opinion a great write from you. Best wishes for the Contest...
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/3/2024 11:41:00 PM
Ha ha good comeback. Big smile...
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/2/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thanks for pointing that out to me. A typo. I guess it would work if the guy only had one eye. Haha
Date: 11/1/2024 1:32:00 PM
Dear sweet andrea, this is so impressive what youv done with the line of enquiry! Brilliant idea! Now i feel like i can maybe do that too, haha. I love your sonnets and this is so heartfelt and touching! And that ending! Seriously this is one of my new faves from you! I just love love “ I lost myself in you and you in me. Unblinking bliss– we were so wholly free.” definitely should be a top winner! Best wishes soul aunt! Sending you light always~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2024 3:13:00 PM
thanks I hope he likes it As I read his little poem, I felt romance in it.
Date: 11/1/2024 12:40:00 PM
Golly this moved me. It’s such an experience to be lost in another. I liked “There was no past or futre, we were one’ Thats a space of transformation! Pangie
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/1/2024 3:13:00 PM
thanks so much, dear
Date: 11/1/2024 10:51:00 AM
Nice sonnet.
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